Reviews for A Chance Not Taken
medea13 | 2005.03.23 - 04:37PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Anonymous |
this is awesome! |
pickles | 2005.02.22 - 10:09PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
please update. |
pickles | 2005.02.22 - 09:18PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
interesting beginning |
Alison of the Faeries | 2004.01.08 - 11:04PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Anonymous |
While it is a good start, I prefer (and assume most others do as well) to read stories in past tense, not present. Also, it wasn't uniformly present tense, it was variable. Sorry to be the grammar police! |
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