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Reviews for Against the Wind

Darque Hart2007.04.16 - 05:50PM14: EpilogueSigned
Thank you so much for the wonderful story. Not only was it a very nice read, but you were so prompt with updates and did not hang us from too many wicked cliffs!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! Ooh ... and I thought that my cliffies were exceptionally evil ... ;)

septentrion2007.04.16 - 12:10PM14: EpilogueSigned
I've enjoyed this story very much. My only regret is that the last chapter felt a bit too rushed. There was room, but it's only my humble opinion, for a complete chapter after the battle, and then the epilogue. Thanks for sharing your writings.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and thank you for all of your reviews. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.

Stellium2007.04.15 - 11:30AM12: Love and War, Part TwoSigned
Blimey, Severus must have balls as big as melons. I can’t believe he did that to her, that’s so shocking! But then I can believe he did it too, it’s just what he would do, very calculated. So he had been taking from her all that time?! I hope they bloody well explode, that would teach him a lesson! I suppose he did the right thing in the end…

Author's Response: He he, actually, the semen goes back into the prostate gland where it gets absorbed into the body. It's called the 'exercise of the stag'. The 'Tao of Love' is a part of the Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM). I must admit that for someone living in the West, parts of it do sound rather strange. Thank you for another one of your wonderful comments!

Darque Hart2007.04.15 - 09:30AM11: Love and War, Part OneSigned
Ch. 11 ... Not much makes me want to scream and rip my hair as Harry Potter dictating Hermione's life. So often in fanfiction I have read this same situation, where if it isn't Harry's Way, it's no way. The "...How can you do such a thing? What in the world has got into you? You are no longer the Hermione I used to know.’ " What possible right does Harry Potter have to tell Granger who she can love? AGGGH!!!! It's SO irritating. OK - rant over.

Author's Response: Harry's definitely very ruthless and rude. He's agitated and angry and talks without thinking. Sometimes, we all say things we regret later. Thank you for reviewing!

Stellium2007.04.15 - 07:43AM11: Love and War, Part OneSigned
Oh no, oh no! Being able to tell they were at it because they were caught in the buff is one thing, but being caught out because of a dodgy smell... I am blushing on their behalf. Poor Hermione. I wonder how she will cope with the split with Severus and deal and an angry Harry – and probably an angry Ron too.

Author's Response: By Merlins beard! Now you made me blush, too. I just tried to dodge the word 'sweaty' ... Do you beta? I got a strong feeling that my next story (if there ever will be one) should be checked by your sharp eyes for that kind of things. *crawls under the desk*

septentrion2007.04.15 - 06:15AM12: Love and War, Part TwoSigned
It was as if he expected to die tonight, wasn't it? As if he realised he had to give her something before he goes.

Author's Response: ... exactly ...

septentrion2007.04.15 - 06:07AM11: Love and War, Part OneSigned
I'm glad for the double update. This first part was heart-wrenching.

Author's Response: There was just no way around it, but, at least, this gives him the opportunity to really search his heart.

scully_m_2007.04.14 - 07:44AM10: Once a Death Eater, always a Death Eater ...?Signed
Well done... I liked it. I like the idea of the emotional contact Riddle has over our snape. I like how her mind is always working... she knows it is not him. Most authors would turn her into an emotional mess, but you are not most authors. I loved it. You gave us a little yummy smut then ripped it away, which is frusterating for a reader in a great way. Keep you and your stories unpredictable. I can not wait for the next chapter. 2 Thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading this chapter and thanks for that great review! The sad consequences of severe child abuse are often adults who are violent criminals. They sometimes describe their need to hurt someone or destroy something as a demon inside that forces them to. I transferred that psychological fact to the Potterverse. And in this world, there's her, and she posesses the strength of the heart to fight that demon ...

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