Reviews for The Quarter-Blood Princess
| QBW | 2015.08.28 - 11:01AM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
| I rather enjoyed myself. Thanks for the ride. After all, I had to read a story named after myself! |
| loreen77 | 2015.03.20 - 10:49PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
| Cute, fun, exciting, silly and wonderful
Loved it! |
| loreen77 | 2015.03.15 - 09:45PM | 1: Same Old Question | Signed |
| Wonderul start. I really like your story title. Minerva also handled that reveal in a very Dumbledorian way. |
| adelgado | 2011.09.13 - 06:10PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
| fUN FUN FUN. Thanks for writing |
| adelgado | 2011.03.17 - 02:33PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
| Fun, I liked it. Thanks for writing |
| Ainneagh | 2011.01.16 - 06:25PM | 8: Great Bat of the Dungeons | Signed |
| ok, so Hermione has a one year old child which, so far, she has not spoken to, played with or taken outside of her rooms...in fact her total contact-time with her daughter is so far less than with her toothbrush....send for social services!!! |
| DistinctVagueness | 2010.11.23 - 04:21PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
| I certainly started out liking the story, but felt a little cold by the end. This is a shame because you clearly are very capable of writing this couple, but you need to be more careful of how you handle the characters. I felt that Hermione needed to show more pain over losing her child and that Snape's character development was far too fast. As a premise, this plot -can- work and if you ever had the fancy to, some reworking of the details and the characters could really add more volume to the story. I'm sorry if this does sound very negative, but I do encourage you to keep writing. I've certainly had my issues too in this fandom, particularly at the beginning, so I understand it quite well. Best of luck with what you write next! -DV |
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.04.16 - 10:15AM | 11: An Old Friend | Signed |
| Could be a typo, but late in the line beginning ""He is, Hermione. He is angry with you for keeping the truth...", the last word of that paragraph should be corrected. Instead of "... you do not believe that he cares for you one wit?", the last word should be "whit". As in 'whittle away to nothing'. And although you wrote this 3 & 1/2 years ago, I'm giving you a "10" for all your great work here. |
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