Reviews for Star Crossed Lovers
Triste | 2007.04.01 - 11:16PM | 3: Two Houses, Both Alike In Dignity | Anonymous |
03-03-2007 14:11 Rated 8
A well written story thus far, if a tad short when it comes to the chapters. It's not the usual stuff I find around the place, with its unique leaps from one character's thoughts to the other. I like the idea of cutting out all the other characters and simply focusing on the two main ones, though. It saves time and effort trying to fit in unnecessary interactions between numerous characters, and gives an interesting layout to Hermione and Snape's relationship.
The slowness of the plot does get to me a tad bit, but I admit it does seem more realistic.
Keep writing.
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Vampire_Princess | 2007.04.01 - 11:16PM | 3: Two Houses, Both Alike In Dignity | Anonymous |
01-07-2007 09:30 Rated 9
I really liked this...really creative.
Just wondering. SS isn't really the generous type, at some stage
he's gonna ask her to move out right?
Or I could see her suddenly getting a job offer and having to choose to leave.
Anyway will be interesting to see what happens next
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sheri22 | 2007.04.01 - 11:15PM | 3: Two Houses, Both Alike In Dignity | Anonymous |
11-17-2006 00:36 Rated 10
Please update soon!
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Bellamar | 2007.04.01 - 11:15PM | 3: Two Houses, Both Alike In Dignity | Anonymous |
11-14-2006 03:06 Rated 10
So I love this so far. Well everything except the box that read completed. Is this really over? I hope not because it seems to have just ended at a very interesting part. Please post more. I don't have the best imagination and if you left it to me then the poor couple would be stuck standing in the same tension filled spot they are in now.
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June W | 2007.04.01 - 11:14PM | 3: Two Houses, Both Alike In Dignity | Anonymous |
11-13-2006 05:55 Rated 10
Romeo and Juliet?? Wait a minute, you've had "character death" warnings in all three chapters now but nobody died except the first chapter. Is the "character death" warning because you're going to kill Severus and Hermione?? Yikes!
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Nichalia | 2007.04.01 - 11:14PM | 3: Two Houses, Both Alike In Dignity | Anonymous |
11-11-2006 22:46 Rated 9
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :)
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MISSenigmatic | 2007.04.01 - 11:13PM | 3: Two Houses, Both Alike In Dignity | Anonymous |
11-11-2006 22:40 Rated 9
This is brilliant. Looking forward to more soon.
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Nichalia | 2007.04.01 - 11:13PM | 2: Peace, Eggs and Purity | Anonymous |
11-09-2006 15:27 Rated 10
:)
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