Reviews for Fair Exchanges
| Neely | 2009.11.16 - 02:02AM | 5: Ch. 5: The Great Escape | Signed |
| oh my gosh, that was simply hilarious.
well done.
(: |
| starlight177 | 2009.09.19 - 09:02PM | 46: Ch. ?? The Uninvited Guest | Signed |
| What an Awesome story! I couldn't believe that I continuously read through all the chapters you have to offer. Even though I, too, crave updates, I applaud the fact that you have stayed with this story. I'll check back in a few months ... after all, Christmas is just around the corner ;) |
| gesse83 | 2009.08.26 - 02:59PM | 45: Ch. 45: The Day of the Jackal | Signed |
| chptr 44 was real genius, you had me hard in a flash. great verbage and imagery. I wish I were her lover I wished she were real. Great, great presentation.
tho you knocked us all in the gut with the assault upon Snape an assault he himself created. again great story telling |
| gesse83 | 2009.08.26 - 02:17PM | 42: Ch. 42: The Challenge | Signed |
| pretty good story I am into chpter 42 now and finally, finally you let loose of some of Hermione's thoughts and 'ideas'. About time. this is a snape and granger ship after all. not to be dissing you completely as your story is rather good. thank you. |
| azureavian | 2009.08.01 - 01:52AM | 13: 13: Sensibility | Signed |
He took one of her hands and pressed it firmly against his lips, just for a moment, to feel how real and solid it was. "Young lady...my heart has been forged of the hardest, coldest steel over many years; whether it can be broken remains to be seen."
"How cavalier," she said, clearly unimpressed.
I love the juxtapose inherent in that phrase. He lies to himself in action and word in the same second.
Author's Response: That's our Sev, master of potions and deception... |
| azureavian | 2009.08.01 - 01:18AM | 8: 8: What Goes Around | Signed |
Haven't you ever heard the phrase 'at night, all cats are gray'?"
Snape scoffed. "There is no night that dark, Lucius.
Laughing so hard I'm actually crying right now.
Author's Response: :-) |
| azureavian | 2009.08.01 - 01:03AM | 5: Ch. 5: The Great Escape | Signed |
Bloody hell no, I'm not, but thanks for asking
Hook, tug, gotcha! LOL love this chapter so much!
Author's Response: yeah, it's one of my favorites too. |
| azureavian | 2009.07.31 - 10:15PM | 3: Ch. 3: Old Habits Die Hard | Signed |
Very well written, excellent premise and you've kept them very nicely in character while making the situation believable. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to get a chance to work more on it someday... |
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