Reviews for The Elements of Magic
Leraiv Snape | 2007.04.02 - 10:37AM | 2: Terra | Anonymous |
11-13-2006 20:14 Rated 10
Wow. There is more this, right? |
Osiodhachain | 2007.04.02 - 10:36AM | 2: Terra | Anonymous |
10-25-2006 03:11 Rated 9
Very well-written and dramatic, but how can the tale go on if one of the lovers has been murdered?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it =D
The "tale" I'm telling is actually a series of vignettes, a whole bunch of one-shots linked by the elements (fire, earth, water, wind, ice etc.) So the next segment will be a brand new story with a brand new focus. Glad you enjoyed it! |
jazzjackrabbit | 2007.04.02 - 10:36AM | 2: Terra | Anonymous |
10-24-2006 16:37 Rated 10
she supposed to understand it from the "goodbye,love" part...she supposed to...but no...she didnt...
SHE CAN'T DIE!! tell me you didnt kill her!
*paces infront of her PC impatiently*
Author's Response: no, she didn't. Poor 'mione. I did kill her I'm afraid. But these are little one-shot vignettes so don't worry... I promise that she'll be alive and well... or at the very least alive... in the next one. |
Lethia Carnivale | 2007.04.02 - 10:35AM | 2: Terra | Anonymous |
10-24-2006 10:56 Rated 10
*grabs tissues to wipe away tears*
Anyway, I really liked the flashbacks to her youth...*sigh* I'm still trying to comprehend what I just read. That was just so...depressing!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! =( I didn't mean to make you cry.... well actually maybe I did a little bit! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story though. |
hedgehog | 2007.04.02 - 10:35AM | 2: Terra | Anonymous |
10-24-2006 01:24 Rated 10
I adore how you tie in her love of freshly cut grass. So thoughtful!
Author's Response: thank you =) It's a very childhood sort of scent for me, freshly cut grass and the prickly strands that tickle your skin is what I associate most with being really young and carefree. |
wilder05112000 | 2007.04.02 - 10:34AM | 1: Flamma | Anonymous |
10-20-2006 02:54
good start, I hope there is more to come.
Author's Response: There is definitely more to come. Stay tuned and I hope you enjoy reading it. |
amsev | 2007.04.02 - 10:33AM | 1: Flamma | Anonymous |
10-19-2006 09:09 Rated 10
Am I ever glad this is a work in progress. Very powerful first chapter. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you =D
This first chapter is the little plot-bunny that bit me in the you-know-where and wouldn't let go. There's plenty more to come. Stay tuned. |
readernotawriter | 2007.04.02 - 10:33AM | 1: Flamma | Anonymous |
10-16-2006 16:58
this story feels so fiery, hot, combustible. Great descriptions.
Author's Response: Glad that I managed to make you feel the element. I really wanted the story to be fiery and I'm happy you enjoyed it! |
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