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Reviews for Captive

munchiedi2016.06.27 - 09:31AM1: -Signed
This is just not captive, its captivating. lol. That just sounds so lame. But really, the word play is so good that you could literally feel the tension and the portrayal is so good. I like this cat and mouse game. Its a shame that its only one-shot. :)

SevioneSHIP2011.04.13 - 05:40PM1: -Signed
this is wonderfully writen. the only thing i have issue with is the use of the word 'pussy' just sort of squik worthy and jars with the rest of the story

krikrilove2009.02.22 - 01:50AM1: -Signed
so sweet love the story write more :]

LadyJaneGrey2007.10.21 - 03:21PM1: -Signed
I'm going to get the shallow bit of the review over and done with...Snape was HOT. No, like, really, really, really hot. And sweet. Nice. But no, I really like your writing, it's v. vivid and sensual and there were a few touches that really made the piece, like the whole Amortenia bit. Thank you! V. nice read.

Megan Consoer2007.10.19 - 01:09AM1: -Signed
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Snaperific2007.05.20 - 08:49AM1: -Signed
zexayyyyy! great one shot, but would also be a nice place to begin - should you ever want to continue it. ;) i'm just sayin' is all....

MeganConsoer2007.05.16 - 03:45AM1: -Signed
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, but I'm afraid this story is done :)

domino3332007.03.31 - 07:04PM1: -Anonymous
04-02-2007 04:52 Rated 10

awesome story!!


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