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loreen772014.01.12 - 05:13PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Good thing duster was there for potter and snape's spat. Hermione is going to be in seventh heaven researching this.

Jong_Kahn2014.01.08 - 02:24AM2: Chapter TwoSigned
I like the interactions with Duster. Good thing he was there to listen, too--now the familiars know what's going on!

JamesandLily4ever2008.07.28 - 09:57PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
lol! Poor Minerva... then again, she did ask for the potion, didn't she? Anyway, I hope that Crooks and Duster patch up their plan. This is a very nice fic, to say the truth. :D It's far more different than any that I have ever read (it practically reminds me of the Warriors series, if you get me there. ;]). 10/10! Update soon, because I'll be reading on. :D

indigo_rose2008.02.05 - 11:44PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
I notice this story hasn't been updated in quite some time... I realize that sometimes life and perhaps writer's block gets in the way of these things, but I do hope that the Muse will return to you for more of this wonderful story! I especially enjoy the perspective of the familiars and would like to see more. You're a great writer; please come back to this!

indigo_rose2008.02.05 - 11:34PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
I notice this story hasn't been updated in quite some time... I realize that sometimes life and perhaps writer's block gets in the way of these things, but I do hope that the Muse will return to you for more of this wonderful story! I especially enjoy the perspective of the familiars and would like to see more. You're a great writer; please come back to this!

Author's Response: It took me a few months, but I'm updating again.

dacian_goddess2007.03.31 - 09:23PM2: Chapter TwoAnonymous
29-11-2006 13:01

Things are really starting to look good =). I still like the change of perspectives - from the general overview of the matchmaking plot, through the use of the pets' perspective, to the focus on Severus and Hermione's dynamics, by using the human character perspective to spotlight their interaction.

As more of the plot is unveiled, it's also getting easier to follow the pets' machinations; whereas in the previous chapter, readers' understanding may have been a bit encumbered by them. The interactions kept within a logical setting, wherein the familiars knew each others' pet humans - and therefore laid their plans without superfluous information. For the reader, however, it wasn't the easiest of tasks to immediately identify to whom each familiar belonged. That did, of course, convey additional realism to the story (clearly familiars who knew each other, as well as their masters, wouldn't need to laden the flow with any back story within their meetings), but it would undeniably get easier to follow the plot once the readers are familiar with the familiars =).

A small detail that has piqued my curiosity - the variation in some of the characters' first names (i.e. Sprout's, which canonically is Pomona, and Hooch's - Rolanda) - are those per chance deliberate?


k_eeks2007.03.31 - 09:22PM2: Chapter TwoAnonymous
29-11-2006 04:48 Rated 10

Very funny and well-written


fire wall2007.03.31 - 09:21PM2: Chapter TwoAnonymous
29-11-2006 01:42 Rated 10

I am so enjoying this story. I'm glad that you are trying to post quickly.


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