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| loreen77 | 2014.01.12 - 05:13PM | 1: | Signed |
| Good thing duster was there for potter and snape's spat. Hermione is going to be in seventh heaven researching this. |
| loreen77 | 2014.01.12 - 04:35PM | 1: | Signed |
| When you added the new chapter for this it put your collective works on my radar. I am so glad it did. I have been having a great time reading your stories. I am super excited for this one. I have a real soft spot for stories with the familiars and this first chapter is wonderful! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2014.01.11 - 01:38AM | 1: | Signed |
| First of all, welcome back! Very welcome, indeed. I like a lot of things about this chapter. I like Severus, Filius and Lucius being "The Trifecta". I like the cleverness of the familiars to set up Albus and Minerva to have an altercation which would ensure that the familiars would have time and privacy enough to inspect the potions storeroom properly. I especially liked your explanation about the Seers. It kinda serves Hermione right for being such a snob. “The Unforgivables require strength of will to cast. If you don't want them to work, if you don't have the intent to make them work, they fizzle. Divination is much the same.” Well spoken, and it makes sense according to the logic of the Potterverse. I was glad to see Harry having turned a corner with Hermione (thanks to Ron's ghost), but I agree with Hermione it's a good start for something that will take a lot of time to heal. Excellent chapter and worth waiting for (though I do hope it's a shorter wait till the next time we get one). Another "10" for you, my dear! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2014.01.09 - 02:06AM | 1: | Signed |
| Great chapter--I'm really glad I'm rereading this story. How cleverly the familiars found Hermione! On to the next!... |
| Jong_Kahn | 2014.01.09 - 01:53AM | 1: | Signed |
| I thought of something, apropos of your Sir Walter Scott quote ("Oh what a tangled web we weave/When first we practice to deceive"). A wonderful 20th Century writer and composer Samuel Hoffenstein wrote an answering couplet: "But when we've practiced quite a while/ How vastly we improve our style!" Anyway, it's an excuse to give you another "10"...! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2014.01.08 - 03:50AM | 1: | Signed |
| This chapter was submitted about five years ago. I'm glad you're still working on it. It's a worthwhile story, and you're a good writer. Thank you for all your work. Please accept another "10"... |
| Jong_Kahn | 2014.01.08 - 02:24AM | 1: | Signed |
| I like the interactions with Duster. Good thing he was there to listen, too--now the familiars know what's going on! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2014.01.08 - 02:13AM | 1: | Signed |
| You recently issued a new chapter, so I thought I'd reread the story from the beginning. I'm glad you're continuing it, as it's a wonderfully entertaining premise. Thanks, Doomspark! Just for that, I'll give you a "10", right here! |
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