Reviews for Authority
| personthing | 2009.08.13 - 05:37PM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
| This was a fun story to read. I loved the way you ended it. It was perfectly done! Thank you for taking the time to write it! |
| pathseeker | 2009.05.24 - 05:05AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
| OOOhhhh, great! And she's pregnant, too! Couldn't the Ministry grant her amnesty so they can have their family and live at Snape Manor and they can figure out the Potion Mistress's diary? A short story, maybe? Since you don't want a sequel? This was really good! |
| HPfan1234 | 2009.05.23 - 09:40AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
| Nawwwwwww!! ^_^ loved it |
| starlight177 | 2009.01.27 - 05:07AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
| This was a very sweet story. I loved the gentle ending. |
| Opal Dragon | 2009.01.19 - 10:50AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
| I have adored this story for quite some time and I love the addition of the new chapter 10. It definitely adds something. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.01.18 - 08:20PM | 12: Chapter 12 – Return to England | Signed |
I've already finished the story (and indicated I wish you'd sequel this some day). In rereading, I found an error: the proper word is not "properness", but PROPRIETY. It rhymes with 'society'. There's no such word as 'properness'--it's "propriety", instead. (No, don't ask me why, I just know that's it's so.)
Author's Response: While I appreciate your good intent, this is rather a patronising response. I am fairly familiar with the word 'propriety'. There is, however, such a word as "properness". Just because your firefox dictionary may not recognise it...
The OED gives three definitions:
1. Excellence, goodness; (esp. of appearance) elegance, handsomeness, tallness. Obs.
2. Appropriateness, fitness, suitability; propriety, respectability.
3. The fact of belonging specially to a person or thing; special quality or character, peculiarity. Obs.
The two are synonyms. Please do not leave patronising reviews in future without checking your own knowledge first. |
| arianwen2 | 2009.01.18 - 06:30AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
Absolutely loved it. Especially the ending. I'm a sucker for happy endings! :-)
Author's Response: *sigh* Me too! I have only a few fics where I'm happy with a non-happy one! |
| Ava_Adore | 2009.01.17 - 04:22AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
Wicked story, well done! Really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked the revisions. :) |
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