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personthing2009.08.13 - 05:37PM13: EpilogueSigned
This was a fun story to read. I loved the way you ended it. It was perfectly done! Thank you for taking the time to write it!

pathseeker2009.05.24 - 05:05AM13: EpilogueSigned
OOOhhhh, great! And she's pregnant, too! Couldn't the Ministry grant her amnesty so they can have their family and live at Snape Manor and they can figure out the Potion Mistress's diary? A short story, maybe? Since you don't want a sequel? This was really good!

HPfan12342009.05.23 - 09:40AM13: EpilogueSigned
Nawwwwwww!! ^_^ loved it

starlight1772009.01.27 - 05:07AM13: EpilogueSigned
This was a very sweet story. I loved the gentle ending.

Opal Dragon2009.01.19 - 10:50AM13: EpilogueSigned
I have adored this story for quite some time and I love the addition of the new chapter 10. It definitely adds something.

Jong_Kahn2009.01.18 - 08:20PM12: Chapter 12 – Return to EnglandSigned
I've already finished the story (and indicated I wish you'd sequel this some day). In rereading, I found an error: the proper word is not "properness", but PROPRIETY. It rhymes with 'society'. There's no such word as 'properness'--it's "propriety", instead. (No, don't ask me why, I just know that's it's so.)

Author's Response: While I appreciate your good intent, this is rather a patronising response. I am fairly familiar with the word 'propriety'. There is, however, such a word as "properness". Just because your firefox dictionary may not recognise it... The OED gives three definitions: 1. Excellence, goodness; (esp. of appearance) elegance, handsomeness, tallness. Obs. 2. Appropriateness, fitness, suitability; propriety, respectability. 3. The fact of belonging specially to a person or thing; special quality or character, peculiarity. Obs. The two are synonyms. Please do not leave patronising reviews in future without checking your own knowledge first.

arianwen22009.01.18 - 06:30AM13: EpilogueSigned
Absolutely loved it. Especially the ending. I'm a sucker for happy endings! :-)

Author's Response: *sigh* Me too! I have only a few fics where I'm happy with a non-happy one!

Ava_Adore2009.01.17 - 04:22AM13: EpilogueSigned
Wicked story, well done! Really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked the revisions. :)

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