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Cleo_cat2006.09.19 - 01:28PM2: Chapter 2Signed
I love the strength in both the characters. Thank you for sharing what must be a difficult storyline to write. Cleo x

Author's Response: Thanks. It's easier now that I've had time to work it over some. I just hope I'm giving this justice.

TwinkleCandy2006.09.19 - 08:58AM2: Chapter 2Signed
I love it - this is fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks, more up shortly.

Guinnevere2006.09.19 - 03:33AM2: Chapter 2Signed
Good fic, but I'm a bit torn, Southern. While I can appreciate Severus' reluctance to participate quite as intimately as he was required to do, he did take part in the abduction, after all, and he must have known what Riddle had in mind for Hermione, in a general sort of way. This makes his unwonted gentleness and her ready capitulation seem rather suspicious in my mind, because playing good-cop/bad-cop to induce Stockholm Syndrome is one way of 'breaking' a captive. She could be very useful to the Death Eaters if she were sent back home with a confused loyalty to one of them - even if she doesn't choose to upset Harry by letting on what exactly happened to her. Maybe especially if she doesn't let on.

Ah, well. The writing, as always, is extremely well done. Good job; I look forward to the epilogue.

Author's Response: Indeed he did play a part in her capture. It's interesting that she seems to have forgiven that, isn't it? You have all valid points, and they're all answering in the following chapter. I cannot say more. :) Thanks as always for letting me know what you think.

laperchette2006.09.18 - 07:38PM2: Chapter 2Signed
An epilogue??? I thought that will be a very long story, something to look forward to in the cold fall and wintertime... But perhapse you will soon right another long story? And by the way: I loved that one, althoug I normally a bit sqeamish with dark stories, but the character-descriptions were marvellous! Thank you very much!

Author's Response: LOL Sorry about that. No, this one is quite short. However, I've just posted the first chapter of my next long story. I hope you give it a chance. Thank you for reading this and letting me know what you think.

JoKK22006.09.18 - 03:14PM2: Chapter 2Signed
Oh. An epilogue already? I was just settlling down for a nice long adventure. Oh well I will take what I can get. I found this chapter very satisfying. Bad Situation begets honest resolution. None of this was their choosing but they work through it together. I kind of like the slight variation that love didn't instantly blossom. (Of course, if the story were a bit longer, would it ever have happened? Or could they come out of the war as something closer to friends?) Thanks for posting -- JoAnne

Author's Response: I'm so sorry about that. Yeah, she does not and will not love him in this story, but that doesn't mean things will be sour. The ending is... hmm... different, I hope. Thank you so much for reading.

Sampdoria2006.09.18 - 02:40AM2: Chapter 2Signed
I liked this chapters and feel that you have hold both Severus and Hermione more to the character I belive the books present them to be, than other stories I have read based on the same idea. I see you mention the epilogue already, even though I'm not the biggest fan of stories that seems to go on forever without ever getting to the point, I do feel there could be more to this story. I admit to be a succer for romance and are always the most happy with an happy ending:-))

Author's Response: Thanks. I tried to keep them as I see them and how they might react if forced into something like thise. Every sees things differently though. I hope you will be happy with the ending that I have planned.

madjh2006.09.18 - 02:13AM2: Chapter 2Signed
Ack! You know... you have the beginnings of an epic fic here. God, Hermione hiding everything from Harry, the battle to win the war, the battle to win Snape afterwards, the battle to make everyone accept Snape. And, of course, she's pregnant. Yes, yes, my imagination's run off with me, but from your author's note, I'm to understand that there's only an epilogue to look forward to? Oh dear...

Rabid plot bunnies are hopping about unhindered...

Sorry, I get a bit out of control when I really enjoy a fic. There's never enough for us insatiable readers ;-]

Author's Response: LOL! Not a problem. I'm the same way. I'm happy that you are enjoying the story. The epilogue may leave some things unanswered. There is a possibility that I may return to the story one day, but I am not certain right now. Thank you!


madjh2006.09.18 - 01:54AM1: Chapter 1Signed
Charlie turned Pettigrew. I'd thought is was Draco, and then... I nearly died when it turned out to be the rat. I certainly gagged on my tea. 'Twas very effective, and squicky. *grins* But a little squick never hurt anyone. *runs for the bleach and dives into chapter 2*

Author's Response: Teehee. That was exactly the point (how much worse can it get?). Thanks for reading.

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