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Reviews for Against the Wall

Cenicienta2006.09.04 - 04:00PM1: FluffySigned
Love the first version. The second is not bad but this one is more to my taste. Nicely written and also much more in compliance with my ideal HG/SS ship. Lovely work!

Author's Response: Thank you! Southern feels the same way, which is why there are two endings. Bravo needed to be written, but the fluffy one was the one given. Cheers!

cyprus2006.09.04 - 03:55PM2: BravoSigned
ooohhh, that was good. you gonna do more? that so speaks of a sequel, or more chapters. "but im still shivering" why is she still shivering. if she had died i might understand it and give it an okay on being finished, but that needs more.

Author's Response: A reviewer gave me a bit of inspiration, so there might be a short sequel sometime in the future. I have a few things higher up on my to do list, though, so it might be a while. THank you for reading it and the feedback!

Veronica Mia Mars2006.09.04 - 03:25PM2: BravoSigned
all i can say is wow.

Author's Response: Thank you! *smiles*

LadyJaneGrey2006.09.04 - 03:07PM1: FluffySigned
Wow! I read the second version first because I'm in an off mood and felt like saving the fluff till last. But never mind the actual plot...HOLY CRAP! The sex was hot. You're so vivid, almost graphical, but still tasteful. Your erotica is most certainly not just pornography with good lighting! I think the darker ending was better...probably appeals to my current dark mood.

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks! I think I like Bravo better as well, but Southern likes the fluffy ending best, and that's what matters, seeing as I wrote it for her. (I gave her the fluffy one, but couldn't keep Bravo to myself, either.)

phoenixfeather2006.09.04 - 01:37PM2: BravoSigned
Liked the fluffy ending. But I loved your second ending twist, Yup Loved it!

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! I didn't even think of it as a twist. Cheers!

MajesticAthene2006.09.04 - 11:39AM2: BravoSigned
I'm partial to fluffy, but the second ending was amazingly clever. Good job!

Author's Response: Amazingly clever? *blushes* Thank you!

Subversa2006.09.04 - 09:51AM2: BravoSigned
I am enough of a sap to always love ending number one the best, but ending number two was equally superb. Brava, cara bella!

Author's Response: Thank you, Subversa. *smiling happily*

Subversa2006.09.04 - 09:43AM1: FluffySigned
Hells bells, Avery! That was fabulous! Hot, sexy, tender, and your relentless use of the language to thrill us continues unabated.

“You’re willing to risk corruption?”

“Only if you’re willing to risk redemption.”
Fabulous!

Author's Response: Heehee! Those lines are the reason I couldn't decide on which ending to post. I'm so glad you liked them!!! *blows kisses*

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