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Reviews for Against the Wall

blancno12006.09.06 - 01:42AM2: BravoSigned
im not very sure which i like best but i find both very engrossing ill watch for further writings from you. keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you!

Armadillo2006.09.06 - 12:45AM2: BravoSigned
Aaaaahh, really nice, this one ! In my taste the first chapter was too fluffy - but the second one - BRAVO indeed. If you'll ever write a third chapter, depending on the outcome, the whole could go perfectly as "fluffiness with a twist" ...

Author's Response: I am thinking about another chapter... although it probably wouldn't be fluffy, even with a twist. But, it will have to wait, I'm afraid. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this! I appreciate it!

whittyleah2006.09.05 - 09:18PM1: FluffySigned
“I guess I have no choice in the matter. You have me up against the wall.” hehehehehehehehehe! I love it! Perfect Severus! Perfect Hermione! Perfect smut! *runs to read next one*

Author's Response: Cheers! I'm glad you liked it!

ohhhdear2006.09.05 - 06:53PM2: BravoSigned
Yes, I like the second ending better too. However, I almost didn't even get that far because I was sure the first chapter had been misposted a second time. Maybe if the alternate ending would have been somehow separated from the second ending by a line of ******* or some other device? The second ending is MUCH too delicious to risk a possible ignore.

Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up. I've added an author's note to the top of the second one as a warning. I'm glad you like it! Thank you very much!

Night Owl2006.09.05 - 05:08PM2: BravoSigned
I generally don't like alternate endings, but in this case, it works. I definately liked the second ending; it makes you want to know more, while the first ending leaves you feeling like that's (almost) the end of it. Great job, avery. "Bravo!"

Author's Response: Bravo is the ending that demanded to be written. Fluffy was a little less forceful. In fact, I had to force fluffy out into the open since I knew that Southern would enjoy fluffy far more. ;-) Thank you very much, my dear. I appreciate the feedback!

Mysticaltomes2006.09.05 - 04:59PM2: BravoSigned
both endings are wonderful...it's not too often i find myself enjoing the fluffy and the angsty endings of the same tale :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Cheers!

kodiak2006.09.05 - 11:53AM2: BravoSigned
I don't know that I would consider this completely dark. It seems pretty clear to me that he is still playing a role with the DEs... What he did actually saved her life.

Author's Response: No, not completely dark, but darker than the fluffy version. As for it saving her life, you never know, maybe Lucius was testing out Severus' loyaties to find out if it would be safe to trust him about his own changing loyalties. *snort* Okay, maybe not. *grin* Thanks for the feedback!

babettesnape2006.09.05 - 09:22AM2: BravoSigned
Wow... Honestly I like this version better

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I aim to please! Thanks.

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