Reviews for Salazar's Heir
| Aurora | 2010.10.31 - 05:08AM | 28: Nothing More Than A Memory | Signed |
| I never would have believed that any HP fan fic author would write a work redeeming Voldemort. You must have an extremely forgiving heart to be able to come up with such a concept. Bravo!! |
| Ritardando | 2010.06.10 - 04:01AM | 3: Loneliness | Signed |
| What happened to Viktor's accent when he's speaking to both Severus and Hermione? Even Harry pokes fun at his pronunciation of Hermione's name: "Herm-own-ninny." To me, Viktor's accent is a big part of his character, just as Fleur's French accent is to her heritage.
Also, the premise of the different Heirs slightly bothers me. Viktor, the Heir of Hufflepuff?
Good start to a story, but it seems a bit thrown together for me, with random elements added here and there. Some things aren't quite explained right away, but I can only hope that they're expanded upon later in the story. |
| MysticRaven | 2010.03.03 - 09:46PM | 37: Epilogue | Signed |
| Oh, I'd forgotten how much I love this story! I just finished another read-through. |
| juliajane | 2009.06.15 - 11:14PM | 6: Spy Against His Will | Signed |
| This story is very well written, but I have to say that I find the outset just too implausible/AU for my taste. Having Hermione meekly learn flute without any explanation? Having the whole school turn on her for something that is obviously not her fault? I can see the Hermione/Snape relationship going down an interesting road, though. Of course, it is your story, and I know that you can make it as AU as you like -- just giving my review. |
| nimath772 | 2009.05.21 - 12:10AM | 37: Epilogue | Signed |
| I loved this story! I especially liked that it didn't take anything for granted and challenged the reader. It was by far one of the most unique and compelling stories I have read and I thank you for sharing it. |
| BELLE_SCOT_UK | 2009.05.17 - 04:34PM | 37: Epilogue | Signed |
| Hi...I just read your story again..sorry...thought I had written a review before..but I guess I did not..I just wanted say how very much I enjoyed it..It was amazing...one of the best stories I have ever read...also wanted to say...that agree with what someone else said regarding your writing...you should get some of you work published...I for one would absolutely read them if they were..Bel |
| mgck | 2008.09.15 - 12:01AM | 8: Unveiling Secrets | Signed |
| Yay! Severus saves the day. :D |
| verasuspense | 2008.09.02 - 11:21AM | 6: Spy Against His Will | Signed |
| "A man convinced against his will/ Is of the same opinion still". (Alexander Pope) Something to bear in mind. |
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