Reviews for A Choice of Roads
i_luv_snape | 2006.08.10 - 05:22PM | 27: Be My Guest, Part 2 | Signed |
No offense... but FINALLY. Sorry just they have so been wanting to do that forever. And they finaly did. Claps for the genius of you. Luv this story please update again soon. |
le rouret | 2006.08.10 - 05:20PM | 27: Be My Guest, Part 2 | Signed |
One word:
Whoooooooooo .......
*lights cigarette* |
Maggie | 2006.08.10 - 05:18PM | 27: Be My Guest, Part 2 | Signed |
Hot, yet tender. Well done!!! No pun intended, honestly I shouldn't write reviews when I'm this hungry. Hungry for more that is...thanks for the quick update! |
Brisinggammen | 2006.08.10 - 05:05PM | 27: Be My Guest, Part 2 | Signed |
You know what? I find it difficult to find the right words too. There was so much building up to this chapter, so much anticipation, that I was curious how you would pull it off. Suffice to say - you did. That was beautiful, tender, sweet and very HOT. I loved the akwardness, the fumbling, their insecurities and passion. Thanks for a wonderful chapter. |
Betz | 2006.08.10 - 04:59PM | 27: Be My Guest, Part 2 | Signed |
That was a very sweet and tender first time for the two of them filled with vulnerability and deep tenderness. It brought tears to my eyes several times over how much they were insecure, but realized how much they loved each other and each other's imperfections. Very wonderful my dear, so sweet, so very intense. BRAVA!!!! |
MlleGigi | 2006.08.10 - 03:24PM | 27: Be My Guest, Part 2 | Signed |
Took them long enough to put this up (then again, I'd already read it over at FF -- just couldn't wait)! What still amazes me about this is that I think this is the first time I've read a SS/HG "lemon" scene which has given me a real sense of how surreal it would probably be for Hermione (or at least canon Hermione) to find herself romantically involved with Severus so shortly after graduation -- this is intended as a compliment, not a criticism. I take this as a sign that your story is more realistic and plausible than some others, also that your characterizations are more three-dimensional -- your story really "breathes". The only thing which surprised me a bit is that the room which Hermione saw in her vision was at Severus's house -- I had imagined it to be at Hogwarts, since it's reasonable to assume that they would spend more of the year there. I was also a tiny bit disappointed in Severus -- we all know that he isn't exactly the flowers-and-candy sort, but this *was* Hermione's first time and it struck me that he could have put a bit more effort into the occasion! Then again, for such a private man to invite her to his house is significant...and I'm sure that Hermione appreciates that. Certainly, the house already seems to realize something about Hermione that even Severus may or may not have realized yet! |
ynnuendomercury | 2006.08.10 - 02:46PM | 27: Be My Guest, Part 2 | Signed |
awwwwwwww thanks for the update I love kissing and cuddling :) |
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