Reviews for A Choice of Roads
Bettina | 2006.07.31 - 08:21AM | 26: Be My Guest, Part 1 | Anonymous |
ah, finally you continued this wonderful story! I've been polling for ages. What a wonderful plot you've created here and now you still keep the tension up. Please continue updating even if we now see Severus in a different light -- your version deserves all our respect.
I love the so physical description of their feelings, the electricity between them and the interaction as bird-cat-human. very unique and brilliantly told.
I wonder also if you ever make Harry, Ron -- or maybe Remus -- accept this relationship.
The idea of petting in the library is wonderful, describing so well Severus' suppressed feelings. I'd be most interested to see his home. maybe there is an explanation as to why he is as he is. thank you for this entertainment,
Bettina
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midwife_witch | 2006.07.31 - 05:38AM | 26: Be My Guest, Part 1 | Signed |
I hope they're still this sweet with each other after they have "gone to Severus' house" (ahem). Great anticipation building, though; this is one of those stories where I think I'm almost going to be sad when they finally sleep together because the build-up has been so satisfying. Okay, now that I've stayed up all night reading this, I'm going to try and squeeze in an hour of sleep before I have to go to work. Ah, the trials and tribulations of fanfiction addicts... |
ladyofthemasque | 2006.07.31 - 03:12AM | 26: Be My Guest, Part 1 | Signed |
Squee! You updated! Pout! You didn't update enough of the story! Growl! Write more, so your fanatical readers can squee some more, capiche? ~Lotm ;-D
Author's Response: Thanks! I posted the second part that contains um, cuddling and certain other things, but it's still in the queue. However, both parts are up at ff.net... enjoy! |
Rubyfey | 2006.07.31 - 12:37AM | 26: Be My Guest, Part 1 | Signed |
Ah, so sweet! So they're BOTH nervous as to how they'll be seen / accepted by the other? Even after both have made clear they love the other? I hope this visit to his (soon to be "hers" as well???) home will "cement" the relationship and remove all doubts, permanetly! (I'm also hoping something "else" will be cemented---just what "was" it Severus retrieved from the family vault? Let's see, wasn't that a JADE engagement ring Hermione saw on her finger, in the future visions?) And of course, he's got to show her his roses, and the maze his own family built, that was so very superior to the one at the Retreat. Oh, I hope they have a Loooonnnnggg weekend together!!! (squees in delight)
And, I hope Part 2 will be an equally LONG and satisfying chapter. Do you have it already written, and just awaiting Mod approval? If so, --- HURRY UP OUT THERE, dear Mods---please? And if you're still working on it, what's your favorite encouragement / inducement that we can send your way? Thoughts? Prayers? Hugs? Bribes (chocolate, candy, tens and twenties)??? ;[)
Do please serve up that promised "dessert" of lemon pie really, really soon, ok?
STILL lovin' it,
Rubyfey
Author's Response: Thanks for that! Yes, they still feel a bit nervous... but don't worry too much! (smile)
Part 2 must still be floating in the queue as I had posted it together with part 1... however, it has been posted on ff.net. I hope you enjoy it... |
mekareami | 2006.07.30 - 11:08PM | 26: Be My Guest, Part 1 | Signed |
Very pleased to see an update :) I hope RL cooperates in letting the next one come soon!
Thank you for writing |
Starbridge | 2006.07.30 - 10:41PM | 26: Be My Guest, Part 1 | Signed |
Oh boy! I'm as tense with anticipation as they are! Please don't be too long with the second half. Thanks. |
Shiro Ryu | 2006.07.30 - 10:18PM | 26: Be My Guest, Part 1 | Signed |
Oh, that was good! I sooooo hope that part two is coming out soon! |
MlleGigi | 2006.07.30 - 09:58PM | 26: Be My Guest, Part 1 | Signed |
Update...WOOHOO!! I hope that you're planning to post the rest of the chapter in fairly short order...because some of us are *still* waiting for the long-promised lemony goodness which you suggested would be awaiting Hermione upon her visit to Severus's home (primping and daydreaming on Hermione's part doesn't seem to count, somehow). Nevertheless, I loved the little tidbits about Crookshanks ("food that its human slave was obliged to provide whenever said cat wanted"...hilarious, and oh so true!) |
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