Reviews for When the Leaves Have Fallen
| mousemt | 2013.11.10 - 07:07PM | 1: When the Leaves Have Fallen | Signed |
| Just plain sweet. Thank you. |
| imabitch_imalover | 2008.03.28 - 09:07PM | 1: When the Leaves Have Fallen | Signed |
| Needs betaing, I think. How about dryad (a la Narnia). Interestingly enough I was listening to Enya's One by One as I read this. You should listen to it if you haven't already. Fits the story, I think. |
| Reavyn | 2008.02.28 - 08:57AM | 1: When the Leaves Have Fallen | Signed |
| Lovely story, but you should be sure to have someone else proofread before you post. The few mistakes there were jar you out of the flow of the story. The brain tends to skip over spelling mistakes and word substitutions (thought instead of though), so having a fresh pair of eyes helps. |
| Kuronekosama_KK | 2006.10.02 - 11:41PM | 1: When the Leaves Have Fallen | Signed |
| I liked it. While it DID sound like a 6th year telling it, in a way, the entire tone and repetativeness and other things that drive me insane were all there. I liked the plot though, the descriptions could use some work and the easy way out was taken a few times, like "excuse the cliche" to be hoenst, no one to my knowledge, would say that when telling a story. Ever. But all in all, rather good. |
| skyedancer | 2006.08.14 - 09:52AM | 1: When the Leaves Have Fallen | Signed |
| thank you for leaving that box of tissues by the exit. The last few sentences were a bit blurry. I love third person stories and this one was sweet. |
| ivyshadowdragon | 2006.03.25 - 11:01PM | 1: When the Leaves Have Fallen | Signed |
| Really nice story. Keep up the good work |
| AMRA | 2005.09.29 - 01:24AM | 1: When the Leaves Have Fallen | Anonymous |
| Very nice... truly unique... I've never heard of a story such as this one... Nicely done... Very Romantic! |
| gsdmommy | 2005.09.28 - 12:18PM | 1: When the Leaves Have Fallen | Signed |
| very interesting, unusual, and nicely done!
thank you!
maureen |
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