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| Sarahsema | 2006.07.14 - 05:11AM | 2: Part Two | Anonymous |
| Please continue this! The story is really good, but I think you can do without the dashes in between the part. They read better without them, since there really isn't a time lapse (in this one) between them. Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. :) I originally wrote them as a drabble series (100 words per segment) so that is the purpose of the dashes. I will probably continue this at a later date, though. Glad you enjoyed it! | |||
| Guinnevere | 2006.07.13 - 09:59AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| Her eyes immediately honed in on the toned chest... Not unless for some reason she was trying to sharpen it or wear a hole in it. If she was focusing her gaze on his chest, then she homed in on it, as would a homing pigeon or a homing device. You can hone things on a whetstone to sharpen them, or you can hone down something to wear it away. Writers of dictionaries now accept the bastard phrase hone in, because it's in such general use, but I never will... Good story, nevertheless. Author's Response: Thanks so much for catching that! And thanks for leaving a note - I'm glad you enjoyed the story. | |||
| whittyleah | 2006.07.13 - 08:53AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| Please continue! I really like this. Their banter is great! You described everything so well I could see it happening in my mind...yum, Severus in the bathtub..... :) I would love to read more! Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review. At present I may continue it, but I'm concentrating my efforts on Dark Roast. Glad you enjoyed it! | |||
| Missy5 | 2006.07.12 - 09:45AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| "I may continue this series later, but for now I'm leaving the ending up in the air"
Not fair!
*goes around the fanfiction world, stampeding and chanting: we want more, we want more!*
;-) Author's Response: This review keeps popping up for me since I didn't respond to it, even though it's a repeat review. :) | |||
| Missy5 | 2006.07.12 - 09:45AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| "I may continue this series later, but for now I'm leaving the ending up in the air"
Not fair!
*goes around the fanfiction world, stampeding and chanting: we want more, we want more!*
;-) Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) I'm trying to focus on finishing "Dark Roast" right now, but I anticipate returning to this fic at some point. Thanks for reading! | |||
| tallan | 2006.07.12 - 01:04AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| Mmmm. Yummy, just yummy. Add me to those who are looking forward to see more of this story in the future! Now I'm off to read Dark Roast. :) Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely compliments! :) I will probably continue this story once I finish with Dark Roast - thanks so much for going on to read it. Hope you enjoy it! | |||
| DawnEB | 2006.07.04 - 08:18PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| 'I'm leaving the ending up in the air.' Aww, I'd much rather it was down in the water ;)
How much later is later? Should I check back next week? Can you guess how much I like this? Author's Response: Thank you! That's such a lovely compliment. I'm going to try my hand at writing the ending, since demand seems to be so high! I'd count on a week, two, maybe three (but hopefully sooner rather than later). Thanks for reviewing! | |||
| elwing | 2006.07.04 - 04:12PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| YES! Three cheers for Hermione. Thank you for dragging out the excitement. Your Snape is hot and Hermione believable. That's good work for one night, I'll say ;) Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. (I like a hot Snape too) | |||
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