Reviews for Love Him in My Absence
| sandpiper | 2021.02.24 - 10:32AM | 15: Some Sort of Resolution | Signed |
| Thank you, it was very nice. A bit rushed towards the end on all accounts, but otherwise nice. |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.24 - 04:37AM | 12: Mystery Patient | Signed |
| I'm not exactly wondering who is in the coma, my guess would be either someone he hurt while pretending to he a deatheater, or a close relative. But I am wondering when Hermione's spying will blow up in her face. She is again putting her needs, in this case curiosity, above needs and rights of others, in this case Snape's privacy. |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.24 - 04:17AM | 9: A Quiet Place to Sleep | Signed |
| It looks like Snape is a much better student than her. The only unpleasant things he said were about her actual mistakes, he helped her with the salve and even offered a place to stay, which for him would not be easy. While she continues to behave a bit entitled. She doesn't want to impose and stay with someone else even for a day, but she is ok with ruining Snape's potions. Not ok precisely, but expects him to be patient about it, although the price of waisted ingredients is probably already higher than what she would pay for a night or to in some small town b&b.
I don't know if it is intentional, but in a way this Hermione is much closer to the original than many other versions, she has the same flaws.
One thing I don't understand are Harry and Ron. They are a bit one dimensional and thad dimension is not what Rowling wrote. I understand that you needed them to be like that to advance your plot, but for me it would be better to find some way to do it that is less ooc. Another noisy guest, Fred and George visiting or smth.
But the writing is good and I'm looking forward to reading the rest! Thank you. |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.23 - 07:34PM | 6: Back to Square One | Signed |
| Snape is learning, I wonder if Hermione will. So far not so much, still expecting special treatment and attention, she doesn't even notice that the only time she gets negative response is when she starts pushing the boundaries. Except for the very beginning he doesn't attack her first. |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.23 - 07:11PM | 3: The First Day | Signed |
| I like the beginning! Hermione and Severus are in character, one overly confident - she is an amateur, albeit a talented one, and she still expects him to trust her with difficult potions from day one, Snape is rather unsociable and testing her. Harry and Ron are a bit over the top dim, but we'll see. |
| NyxDeLaLuna | 2019.04.22 - 04:45PM | 15: Some Sort of Resolution | Signed |
| Very well developed and written. Severus has two people who love him that's a HEA despite his mother's condition. |
| Pixie Dust | 2017.02.28 - 02:56PM | 15: Some Sort of Resolution | Signed |
| How have I not read this story before now? I found it via random fic, and I am so glad! This was well written and you kept Severus and Hermione in character! Great work! Excuse me while I check to see what else you have written. |
| marisamarinee | 2014.06.15 - 12:00AM | 15: Some Sort of Resolution | Signed |
| Awe so good! |
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