Reviews for Star Crossed
BabyRuth15 | 2006.07.06 - 12:48AM | 1: Star Crossed | Signed |
Dear DarbyKillian,
I thought your poem was well writen. I enjoyed it a lot. You are a great poet. Even if you never read poetry before, your poem has enough to tell the reader what is going on, without giving to much. Again great job.
Ruth |
tmtobias | 2006.06.27 - 03:01AM | 1: Star Crossed | Signed |
This is really beautiful. Well done! |
SeveriaSnape | 2006.05.14 - 06:31AM | 1: Star Crossed | Signed |
Very sweet and beautiful. I liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. |
darkbutterfly | 2006.05.08 - 05:46AM | 1: Star Crossed | Signed |
*pffft* some reviewer i am! =P when i said 'friend and foe' i was referring to the spelling mistake 'foe', not the 'or'...excuse-moi!
Author's Response: Thanks...I'm typing on a laptop and some things slip past the spellchecker...even after I caught some grammatical errors.
Glad you liked it and thanks for the reviews! |
darkbutterfly | 2006.05.08 - 05:42AM | 1: Star Crossed | Signed |
'more fiery than a phoenix feather' - wow, love the imagery...however, i think you mean 'friend and foe'? great job anyway! :)
Author's Response: Ah yes...fixing that...
Thank you for the review and the catch! |
Derelict Author | 2006.05.07 - 09:50AM | 1: Star Crossed | Signed |
Brilliant. Absolutely beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
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Imhilien | 2006.05.07 - 06:31AM | 1: Star Crossed | Signed |
Very moving... it makes you hope that they eventually both 'see' each other wishes.
Author's Response: Thank you very much...
Currently working on...well its something...not certain if it will be ready any time soon or even if it can be submitted. But we'll see if they eventually see each other! |
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