Reviews for Trespassers
queenp | 2005.03.07 - 09:05AM | 2: At The Core Of Things | Signed |
Quite an interesting pair of POV. It took me a bit in each chapter to figure it out. This was well written. Congrats. |
Selene | 2004.07.14 - 04:50AM | 2: At The Core Of Things | Anonymous |
That, was awesome. About two thirds of the way through of the second part, i realized it was her wand and had to reread it all so that it made sense. I've never read anything like that, it was....beautiful. |
Anonymous | 2004.02.16 - 12:40PM | 2: At The Core Of Things | Anonymous |
Interesting |
Filodea | 2003.12.30 - 07:01PM | 2: At The Core Of Things | Anonymous |
Very interesting view points. I enjoyed them, especially the wand. It would make sense, if they are soul mates, that their wands would be compatible as well. |
GrrArrg | 2003.12.30 - 04:17PM | 2: At The Core Of Things | Anonymous |
Very original take on the third person angle. It took me a while to figure them out but I got there in the end!
Kisses
GrrArrg |
Patatita | 2003.12.30 - 04:10PM | 1: Trespassers | Anonymous |
The more I read your short fics, the more I like them. Your style is great, you know how to describe have the places, the ambiance, all the elements to just let the suggestion of something changing, how the relationship is going to start... just lovely! |
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