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| Alexa1993 | 2012.06.27 - 09:10PM | 1: Wintry Passion | Signed |
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| s50m | 2012.02.24 - 11:56AM | 1: Wintry Passion | Signed |
| I really enjoyed your poem. It was very descriptive and perfectly captured the moment. Fantastic work! :) | |||
| BabyRuth15 | 2006.07.06 - 01:09AM | 1: Wintry Passion | Signed |
| Yes very true, but what I liked that you did was not tell the readers what was happening let them find out at the end. Amazing work. I enjoyed reading something well writen Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review. Glad you enjoyed it! I wanted the poem to be kind of vague at the beginning because I felt it set a certain tone...many times in fanfiction people forget that Snape is not a nice or easy person to love, yet Hermione took him on; much like her crusade for equal house-elf rights. She fought to break down his walls and found love and passion behind them, so this poem is just a small reflection, a short peek into their lives. | |||
| Harmony Bites | 2006.05.14 - 12:52AM | 1: Wintry Passion | Signed |
| I liked this--your rhythm and rhyme and that you managed to acutally manage some naughtiness in there--liked much of the imagery too--like the coiled serpents. Author's Response: Thanks for the review harmony! The "coiled serpents" line was one of my favorite too...it was my first *attempt* at some smut so I'm glad it went over well, especially since its in poetry form. | |||
| salena snape | 2006.02.10 - 04:37PM | 1: Wintry Passion | Signed |
| Very nice. Wonderful cadence and lovely story to boot! Author's Response: Salena Snape: Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review. | |||
| Guinnevere | 2006.02.10 - 02:00PM | 1: Wintry Passion | Signed |
| You chose an elastic, forgiving form and meter, Aturia. There are still some lines that gave me a little trouble figuring out how they scan, but that might be due to regional pronunciations. Still, the imagery is great! Good job, on a very ambitious project! (It got lazy me to look up the elements of scansion and meter in limerick poetry, so it's also provocative and instructive! Woot! Go, girl!) Author's Response: Guinnevere: Thanks for the input...you're right though, the limerick style is ver flexible for trying to get a point across...some of the lines were a little jumbled to follow, but I tried to make them flow with the plot of the story...combining poetry with a story is a little challenging, especially when trying to get some *smut* into it! | |||
| rickat | 2006.02.08 - 08:31PM | 1: Wintry Passion | Signed |
| like your poem. it's quite different from the stories I read so far. am admiring everybody who is able to rhyme cause I'm not. So don't bother about rhymes beeing sometimes somewhat choppy... really a nice peace. is there somewhere more of it ;=)?
greetings Author's Response: rickat: Glad you liked it...I have always wrote poetry, so it just seemed natural to combine it with telling a story about Snape and Hermione. If you are interested, I have two other poems archived at this site, just look under my user name for the link. | |||
| secnarf027 | 2006.02.08 - 08:12PM | 1: Wintry Passion | Signed |
| Fantastic poem. "With student serpents coiled asleep" has to be my favorite line. Great example of alliteration / onomatopoeia. Author's Response: secnarf027: Thanks for the review..I had such *fun* stringing together those words...I am always surprised when some phrases pop into my head at the right moment, which is good for writing alliteration and onomatopoeia in poetry. | |||
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