Reviews for A Taste Of Silence
| snapefan1983 | 2022.06.06 - 02:36PM | 3: Wandless Magic | Signed |
| You need your tongue to Swallow food and drink right ? |
| Jong_Kahn | 2012.06.15 - 11:04AM | 3: Wandless Magic | Signed |
| Excuse me: how could Hermione eat, without having a tongue? She'd choke! Think about it: without being able to push the food around in her mouth to get more properly chewed, she couldn't get the mass of food properly masticated. Plus, the tongue helps 'move it down the line' to be swallowed. At the very least, it would be incredibly messy! Not to mention the embarrassment of opening her mouth, literally facing everyone in the hall (many of them curiously trying to see her). I'm not trying to hurt or offend you here, merely observing I don't think you totally thought the reality of this--even in a fantasy world--through all the way. It's still a good story! |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.08.10 - 04:53PM | 3: Wandless Magic | Signed |
| hermione should learn sign language to she can talk!! |
| DragonRose | 2008.11.16 - 01:26AM | 3: Wandless Magic | Signed |
| I wanted to let you know I like you story here. I did want to point out one minor detail. The Slytherin student, Blaise Zabini, is actually a boy, not a girl. Thank you for writing your story. |
| verasuspense | 2007.12.30 - 02:15PM | 3: Wandless Magic | Signed |
| rumours like what he will hand himself to be brought back to Azkaban". That's a very awkward turn of phrase. "Rumours that he will turn himself in to be sent back to Azkaban" might be better. |
| pickles | 2005.08.26 - 06:15PM | 3: Wandless Magic | Signed |
| great chapter. |
| Volin_Devinaux | 2003.12.29 - 07:52AM | 3: Wandless Magic | Anonymous |
| Great job! I have really enjoyed what I have read thus far. Please update soon. |
| Potions Mistresss | 2003.12.29 - 07:48AM | 3: Wandless Magic | Signed |
| I love the conflict in this story. It's wonderful the way you made them interact together... I really hope you update soon! I will be waiting! |
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