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Reviews for You Look Forward

Snapesangel262009.08.15 - 07:30AM1: You Look ForwardSigned
I love this piece. You can feel exactly how Severus feels. I like how you are so subtle when writing about severus and hermione being together. It works well. Excellent work

SandyKinns2008.02.18 - 03:20PM1: You Look ForwardSigned
Good good, very deep. Although I didn't get it was from Sev's POV until I read that it was, IDK if I'm just dumb or what lol, but it worked either way.

salena snape2006.02.03 - 04:08PM1: You Look ForwardSigned
Jules, this is another well written piece. Not quite a song fic, but the lyrics you chose definately set the stage for the fic. You can truly see the connection of the wounded souls. Any chance of you doing another short piece from Hermione's pov?

Author's Response: Shelly! *huggles* Thank you! You know, this is the first thing I'm REALLY proud of, so any reviews for this piece mean incredibly much to me. I don't think I'll do something like this one from Hermione's POV though - I'm more comfortable with Severus, for whatever reason. And right now I'm not so much in a "Hermione mood" anyway - which basically means that if I decide to write HG/SS, it'll be Severus' POV most likely. Hermione is like Remus to me - not quite my person, somehow. I can descibe her, but not what's going on in her head. BUT there's an SS/SB fic on my LJ! *laughs madly*

DistinctVagueness2006.01.19 - 05:31PM1: You Look ForwardSigned
Thank you for mentioning me, but this is a piece entirely on its own :) I thought there was something very real and palpable in this perspective and I very much felt that I was looking at Hermione though his eyes. The atmosphere is rather heartbreaking...and while reading, I agreed with the complete loss of hope he feels. Well written. Thanks for writing. -Catherine

Author's Response: Well, if I hadn't read 'The Very Air', I wouldn't have got the idea or parallelisms altogether, so I think some credit justifiedly goes out to you ;) Thank you so much for reviewing! This coming from you means very much to me.

Kaesespaetzle2006.01.18 - 07:20AM1: You Look ForwardSigned
It's intense, profound, refreshingly new(like your other ideas). You can describe so much in so little words...And I can't describe my thoughts about this fic right now...For once I don't nag you for the shortness of the fic;-) Don't believe I'll stop nagging about the others, though!

Author's Response: I'm so unbelievably happy that you don't have much to critisise.That's a first! And you know you won't see any At Dawn till I have it finished, which you know might take some time! You made my day with this review!

droxy2006.01.17 - 07:20PM1: You Look ForwardSigned
angsty! Well done and contemplative

Author's Response: Thank you! And I actually forgot to add 'Angst' to the genre... *shakes head*

Kaesespaetzle2006.01.17 - 04:12PM1: You Look ForwardSigned
sorry, just saw that it's posted...will read it right away(though I should do french & german homework...) and will review tomorrow!

Author's Response: LOL.




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