Reviews for All the Little Dogs
verasuspense | 2010.05.19 - 05:21PM | 1: All the Little Dogs | Signed |
This didn't hang together at atll well. On the one hand there's the "I want a puppy" part, which leads to nothing except ... buying a puppy It' pretty pointless. On the other hand, there's the confusing business with 'the man". If it's Severus, just say so. And why mention Sirius Black if he's not part of the plot ? I was expecting HIM to be the one in the Death Eater robes, trying to torment Severus. Altogether, not very good. |
Babelfish | 2008.03.13 - 06:46AM | 1: All the Little Dogs | Signed |
Hmm... I liked the idea of the story, but I really hope you are gonna write some more to explain a bit, there are a lot of unanswered questions |
chrissyseebs | 2006.06.25 - 05:28PM | 1: All the Little Dogs | Signed |
Uh oh-not gonna finish it? |
lucrezia_borgia | 2005.12.28 - 03:10PM | 1: All the Little Dogs | Anonymous |
a prize to you for surrealism. what the hell was that about? hee hee! and the previous review made me chuckle. go len, it's your birthday... |
Tinker | 2005.04.30 - 08:14PM | 1: All the Little Dogs | Signed |
While this oneshot is very well-written, it seems to be lacking a focus. Snape's encounter with the boggart is interesting, but Hermione wanting a dog is not. And the small scenes describing an anonymous man are just confusing. What are you trying to show here? If it's Snape's boggart, and how he overcomes it, I think you could cut out the whole puppy-buying part. If there's some other point, then I missed it. |
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