Reviews for The Potions Storeroom
| joannie | 2015.12.27 - 01:42AM | 3: Epilogue | Signed |
| This is one of my favorite short stories. I have lost track of the number of times I have read it. It is so sweet and wonderful. I love it. |
| Buggy | 2013.07.01 - 02:34PM | 3: Epilogue | Signed |
| Short and sweet. Thank you. |
| artemesia | 2011.09.14 - 06:02PM | 3: Epilogue | Signed |
| Most enjoyable. Loved the plot twist of the ineffective obliviate. As others have said, chapters 1 and 2 are stronger than the third chapter, but as you have seen fit to give S and H a happy ending I won't complain! Thanks for sharing your work :) |
| Jenniemay | 2011.06.22 - 08:53PM | 3: Epilogue | Signed |
| Enchanting story. Beautiful writen. Loved reading such lovely work. It eases the heart to read fluff. Loved every moment. The 'Obliviate' is a version of Romeo and Juliet to me... He's killing them... But there is a hope... Which they find. So it's shakespear with a very beautiful happy ending. Congrats. 10 out of 10. |
| sevenseeds | 2011.05.11 - 03:03AM | 3: Epilogue | Signed |
| Such an incredibly tender short story, the emotional depth was beautiful and poignant. Powerful writing. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.11.04 - 05:26AM | 3: Epilogue | Signed |
| Personally, I thought it was clear that in the earlier two chapters both Severus and Hermione were thin due to all the stress they were under, while in this one, Hermione had gained weight due to her pregnancy. I'm glad they'll be getting married, and I liked your story. Thank you for having written it. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.11.04 - 05:16AM | 2: I am the archive of our failure | Signed |
| So in your story Albus has not been affected by the ring horcrux, nor lost his hand's use. I, too, am sorry that they have to be obliviated. On to the next chapter! |
| superduper123 | 2010.03.20 - 09:58PM | 1: I come to you defenses down with the trust of a child | Signed |
| Actually, it is a little known fact that a woman's first time usually only hurts due to poor foreplay.
:) Just thought that our resident know-it-all would get that right. |
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