Reviews for Forget Me Not
Robby | 2005.11.29 - 12:43AM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
I enjoyed this story very much. The story line made me want to keep reading just to find out what happened.
I've bookmarked the page that contains the links to your stories. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! |
Rave_n1 | 2005.11.29 - 12:19AM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
OH. I REALLY WANT that epilougue!
Author's Response: I'm working on it. Thanks for reading! |
TragicFantasy | 2005.11.28 - 11:25PM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
Oh good, there's gonna be an epilogue. That was sad, but very good.
Author's Response: It is sad, but I also tried to make is somewhat hopeful too. Thanks for reading! |
happyharpy | 2005.11.28 - 09:16PM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
I predicted villian!Moody early on, but did not forsee your ending. Very nice! Sev's development into a mature & loving mate was well handled. Outcome sadder, but more satisfying than miracle recovery. Good job.
Author's Response: Very good! This was my first mystery so I'm glad there was a good mix of people being surprised and people saying AHA I knew it! Thanks for reading! |
Adara | 2005.11.28 - 07:26PM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
I read "The End" and was like wait a minute... the end of the chapter or the story? I'm looking forward to the epilogue. This was a great story.
Author's Response: Thanks! The epilogue should hopefully clear up all the loose ends. |
sevfank | 2005.11.28 - 06:17PM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
excellent story! Thanks for writing- More More More!!!
Author's Response: Just the epilogue to go. Thanks for reading! |
Wench | 2005.11.28 - 05:40PM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
That's not fair. I have to be honest, I liked the story, but thought the ending was not fair and really didn't like it.
Author's Response: To quote my father, "Life is not fair." Sorry you didn't like it, but it's in the angst category and I have never promised a happily ever after ending. I wanted something a litte more true to life. Thanks for reading despite that! |
Kiefer | 2005.11.28 - 05:33PM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
A little bare on detail--how much did she forget? For instance, does she know she's a witch? does she remember her childhood at all? But I suppose the 'instant karma' reaction she has toward Severus is warm and fuzzy enough to balance. In any case, it gives a quick wrap up. Good Story.
Author's Response: That's what the epilogue is for. Thanks for reading! |
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