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Reviews for Dark Desecration

pickles2005.11.21 - 11:04AM1: Unwanted VisitorSigned
would like to hear his side? is he under a permanent spell or potion? or does he like playing these "little game"? i was wondering what kind of mood you were in while writing this. will be interesting to see where this goes.. is the enchantress putting you in such moods? ;) waiting for more p

Author's Response: I couldn't sleep. I was feeling depressed. I turned over in the darkness and heard my door creaking open. It just brought back horrible memories. I got up and decided to write. Snape's POV will answer all of your questions.

squeeeze2005.11.21 - 09:00AM1: Unwanted VisitorSigned
Well written, but disturbing and dark. I really, really want to know what´s going on in Snape´s mind to mentally assess how much damage he´s doing to Hermione, and how much to himself for behaving in such a way.

Author's Response: Thanks. Snape's POV will definitely clear things up. We'll also learn more about the state of the world.

JTBJAB2005.11.21 - 08:51AM1: Unwanted VisitorSigned
Kinda hate and love this - I hate that it is Severus, but it was well written... so well done... I personally would be interested in finding things out from his point of view!

Author's Response: Thanks, JTB. I'll have a little something up soon. Thanks.

Chartreuse2005.11.21 - 05:42AM1: Unwanted VisitorSigned
well you certainly can't leave it like that, there are way too many questions. It was disturbing, as it seemed too much like child sexual abuse, even though I know she's of age. You must have been having a bad time, this is a big departure. Hope all is OK.

Author's Response: It does make you think of a child because she seems so weak, huh? It's likely exactly how she feels. Weak, shamed, disgusting... and him be an "authorative" figure at that! I promise to explain where they are and what's the deal in the next one.

Jelly2005.11.21 - 03:29AM1: Unwanted VisitorSigned
Wow...as I was reading this my brain kept telling me not to, but I couldn't stop myself. I can totally see how someone like Hermione could end up this way. I'm very interested to read Snape's POV though...disturbing thought that...

Author's Response: It's an uncomfortable subject. I should have more up shortly. Thanks.

Nyxx2005.11.21 - 01:49AM1: Unwanted VisitorSigned
It isn't very often we come across fics like these, and even though the subject is so dark, it's strangely refreshing to read something that shocks and disturbs us. I thought you wrote this well by detailing her tumultuous, conflicting emotions(which is realistic- the body is traitorous)- and his queer audacity. Although, unlike some other reviewers, I believe I can see why canon Hermione would not speak of this to others, or fight him away. It’s paralyzing fear, combined with the shame of her pleasure and consequent denial, that guarantees her silence.

It seems to me that he did believe she was sleeping in the very beginning when he was extra careful- and with time he started wanting her to be awake and aware of the ‘claim’ he was staking on her. I've always wondered what drove a man to do such things, especially to innocents. Lust, insurmountable yearning? Control issues? Mental sickness? Loneliness? Or some all-consuming desire for human contact? I've never figured it out- and I'd really like to see what revelations you have in store concerning the outcome.

Author's Response: Paralyzing fear! Excellent choice of description. I couldn't put to words what I was thinking. You are right. He truly thought her to be sleeping when he first starting visiting, but he grew to notice her minute responses. I'll explain why he rathers to "pretend" she's sleeping too still and his mentality behind his actions. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. more up soon.


Maria2005.11.21 - 01:14AM1: Unwanted VisitorSigned
This is very well written, even if it seems OOC for both of them. However, as you've stated in your response to the reviews, I'm sure the OOC aspect is something you're going to totally blow away with your next chapter and I'm looking forward to reading it.

Author's Response: I do have something planned for chapter two that should explain why she allows it to go on. Snape will also "tell" us why he does it. It should only be a couple of days or so. Thanks.

Maria2005.11.21 - 01:11AM1: Unwanted VisitorSigned
This is very well written, even if it seems OOC for both of them. However, as you've stated in your response to the reviews, I'm sure the OOC aspect is something you're going to totally blow away with your next chapter and I'm looking forward to reading it.

Author's Response: *wink*

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