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Reviews for Dark Desecration

snailexpress2005.11.25 - 05:49PM2: TrespassingSigned
Wow. Upsetting. And yet...very well written. Seeing this from both points of view probably added to the unsettling effect, as both sides make sense. Make sense for the characters, at any rate. You make it seem that a slight twist of cannon could easily end up here. *shudder*

Author's Response: It is a bit upsetting, and thankfully, this won't happen in canon! I'd hoped that both pov's would be explain their feelings. Thanks. :)

Aphrodites_Child2005.11.25 - 02:27PM2: TrespassingSigned
Wow...very intense stuff. I can see how this power play would arouse this sadistic version of Snape..especially since apparently he's been affected by the Dark Lord..

Author's Response: Yep, he's definitely in the Dark Lord's camp now, even if he wasn't always. More up in a few minutes.

WickedAthene2005.11.24 - 11:33PM2: TrespassingSigned
Wow...disturbing...I never wanted to castrate Snape, now I do...grr...please keep writing, she should escape, or kill him...that would be great...

Author's Response: Thank you. I have a bit more to add. I've decided to not leave her in this situation.

TragicFantasy2005.11.24 - 10:46PM2: TrespassingSigned
Wow, you did that so good. Snape was just, I dunno, mad? Evil? A downright bastard? Yeah, all those sound good. I'd love for you to do a chapter showing her getting away, that would be great. Poor Hermione, I really wanna see her get away from him. She doesn't deserve that.

Author's Response: A downright bastard, I'd say. Evil is such a strong word (poor Hermione says that in HBP). I will continue and allow her to be free of him. Thank you.

cocoachristy2005.11.24 - 09:29PM2: TrespassingSigned
IMHO, Snape seems a tad on the mad side. I wish to believe that killing Dumbledore drove him slightly mad. Its well written and I feel bad for Hermione. He said he will never let her leave and I believe it. I think he will try to keep her there at all costs. No matter which way you write him, your stories are all so very good. Even with material as disturbing as this. xoxoxoxoxox

Author's Response: Some of the things he says does sound mad to people like us. Most tyrants always do though. Thank you very much. I'll have more up soon.

orm irian2005.11.24 - 05:21PM2: TrespassingSigned
Disturbing. Interesting. Well written. Don't do another chapter. It's good as is.

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought about leaving it like this as well, but I've been "coerced" into a tad more.

Somigliana2005.11.24 - 01:03PM2: TrespassingSigned
You have done a brilliant version of a vile, despicable, utterly selfish Snape. I can't say I enjoyed it, but I did appreciate it for what it was. I don't see Hermione getting away from him here - she might crack, though.

Author's Response: It's definitely makeing her weary and has her thinking of things and losing hope. I have a bit more to post. Thank you.

JTBJAB2005.11.24 - 11:47AM2: TrespassingSigned
Oooh yeah, another chapter with Hermione getting away from him would be cool... this one was great - Severus needs a smack (as well as a few other things)!! Well done!

Author's Response: He needs a very good arse kicking. Perhaps Harry will come round and give him one. :)

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