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Reviews for Irresistible

FanOfFanFic2022.01.09 - 04:12PM1: Prologue: OrdersSigned
A worthy effort. A mixed bag of Pros and Cons. At its best, some narrative passages are stellar in their dialogue, action, drama, tragedy, character studies, and plot elements; but there’re drawbacks in those areas throughout the fic, too. Well done on the rare areas of wit, dark humor, and fluff. Some Gothic and Horror elements, also. Not shy on kinks. Mature readers, regardless of age, confident in managing their reading choices, are likely to find interest in the plot themes and explicit content. Controversial on female vs. male autonomy. As a very Dark Fic, some readers should consider carefully whether to proceed.

bralon2016.04.06 - 09:19AM28: Severance--Part ThreeSigned
Loved the begining of the story, started to get disapointed by the middle of it and absolutely HATED the ending. You are a good writer but this plot is horrible... I do not reccomend this story to anyone

Jensteed2015.04.07 - 03:23PM28: Severance--Part ThreeSigned
I should have stuck with my instincts. I decided to tough it out since I was so close to the end and didn't want to waste the hours I'd spent reading this. The last chapters were really not the best, but the final one was just awful. I've read stories that left me in tears because the ending was so sad, but beautifully done. This honestly just left me angry. It was not (in my opinion) a fitting end, it was rushed and badly thoughthe out. I'm disappointed that I even started reading this, I should have quit back at the first few chapters rather than suffer through. I wouldn't recommend this to other readers, it left an awful taste in my mouth.

Jensteed2015.04.07 - 10:25AM23: A Life TogetherSigned
There are some interesting points in this story, some parts that were great to read but overall it's been very disappointing, I'm sorry to say. I can understand that Severus is willing to go through with anything (and did) to win and keep her, but Hermione has been just awful! Weak and snivelling, with absolutely no pride or backbone. God, even the way she views herself was distressing, calling herself an "undercover slut" and berating herself for enjoying a healthy sex life. Like I said, there were great parts in it and I kept reading hoping they would outweigh her awful characterization but I'm sorry to say I just can't keep going. I'm not trying to flame, I really do think there were some really great ideas in this but I'm sorry to say I just can't keep reading.

Dimplz2013.10.12 - 10:24PM28: Severance--Part ThreeSigned
I was itching to read a story where Hermione has to choose between Draco and Severus (I ship Dramione and I like SS/HG as well) and I just so happen to find this story by pure chance. Reading this was truly like the best of both worlds for me as the earlier chapters at least, featured heavily both Dramione and Snamione. The early part of the story was quite enjoyable with the two men competing for Hermione's attention. While I wasn't surprised that Snape won out in the end (this is a SS/HG website afterall), I was surprised at how dark the story turned after the choice was made. Don't get me wrong, the story was quite interesting all the way through but instead of the giddy eroticism I felt at the beginning of the story, I started feeling a type of nervous apprehension as Draco's later actions came into play. As others have said, it would have been nice as a reader to read more info about what happened to Severus, Hermione and the children at the end but I understand the desire of wanting to wrap up a story. Anyway, thanks for the good read.

Outlander262012.12.09 - 11:41PM1: Prologue: OrdersSigned
Don't read this story. It is mean, it is vile and it ends badly. This author needs psychiatric help.

Outlander262012.12.09 - 11:38PM28: Severance--Part ThreeSigned
Don't read this story. It is mean, it is vile and it ends badly.

lacreatif2012.09.26 - 01:31AM28: Severance--Part ThreeSigned
Ugh, the story started off with such promise. It feels like you took the best parts of the best stories and unsuccesfully tried to emulate them. Not one of your strengths, this one.

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