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Reviews for Forget Me Not

Bambu2005.09.30 - 03:52PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Congratulations. You've done a fabulous job of instilling the story, which is especially evident in this particular chapter, with the understanding that it doesn't really matter if she ever recovers her memory of those seven years she's lost. Because, after all, they still have each other, and she's fallen in love with him all over again. It would be nice for them to solve the mystery of 'who' so that they can go forward without having to constantly look over their shoulders, but they're building new memories to replace those that have been lost. It seems as if there is a new appreciation for one another that might not quite have existed before.

The other thing I want to say is that I dearly love a good turn of phrase, and this one: He repeated her name in whispered fragments is absolutely breathtaking.

Author's Response: You're exactly right, though they will discover who did this to her, it has been becoming less about her remembering and more about her loving him. I love hearing from you because your reviews are always so insightful. Thanks for reading Bambu!

Atropos2005.09.30 - 03:26PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Atropos!

leahnecas2005.09.30 - 02:45PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Yay, yay, yay!!! I love how Hermione told Severus she loves him; very believable. Great job, vanityfair, and good luck with the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading leahnecas!

hunnybunch2005.09.30 - 01:22PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
i don't remember, if i ever left you a review, i just wanted to tell you how very MUCH i love this story. i keep checking every other day for updates. when will the mystery about hermione be solved? how many chapters did you plan? thanks for updating!

Author's Response: There shouldn't be more than 15-16 chapters, so we're nearly there. Thanks for reading hunnybunch!

Athena2005.09.30 - 12:12PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
*sigh* loverly

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Athena!

JTBJAB2005.09.30 - 10:22AM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Awww.... yay... great progress for them! Percy is a w****r!!! Stirring up trouble! I look forward to your update!

Author's Response: Percy stirs them to action. He doesn't realize it but he's giving Severus the perfect chance to prove himself to Hermione. As always thanks for reading JTBJAB!

Formeandmygirls22005.09.30 - 10:09AM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Finally!!!!

Author's Response: I hope you mean them going to bed together and not updating 'cause I've been really good about that lately. :-) Thanks for reading Formeandmygirls2!

bellasol672005.09.30 - 09:29AM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Loved the cat and mouse game in the bookstore...and damn that woman for interrupting them! It was nice to see Hermione coming around...and Percy is a weenie! Snape and Hermione need to sic Molly on her son...she's way more scary than Snape! Anyway, great update.

Author's Response: She is scary. But she's also his mother. I think she might take his side on this one only because no one else will. Don't worry, Percy will eat crow. Thanks for reading bellasol!

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