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Twenty--Mist and ShadowReviews For 21. Twenty-One--The Long Way HomeReviews For 22. Twenty-Two--Turn the PageReviews For 23. Twenty Three--DistractionsReviews For 24. Twenty-Four--Potion 986Reviews For 25. Twenty-Five -- I Know You Are But What Am I?Reviews For 26. Twenty-Six--There's No Such Thing As LuckReviews For 27. Twenty-Seven--Over and OutReviews For 28. Twenty-Eight--Dirty and TrueReviews For 29. Twenty-Nine--SalvationReviews For 31. Thirty-One--Wish You Were HereReviews For 30. Thirty--Two For Joy greenwood 2008.07.02 - 05:29PM 19: Nineteen--Behind Black Eyes Signed I have read this chapter twice and feel that we are missing some very vital information here and that Harmione is drawing conclusions based on only what she sees in this one moment in Severus' past...I wonder if those parallel wounds on his back are significant...and what did Lucius mean by his "cock betrayed him twice"...?? Severus keeps so much of his story close to his heart that he will not trust anyone with the whole story! I can't wait to find out more about this scene and what really happened! I somehow doubt that fingernail scratches (even deep ones) could produce the amount of blood that appears to be running down his back (did they remove wings from his back? was he Harrys gardian angel and he was ruined by this evil trick? Just speculation and nothing in cannon but it did tickle my imagination ha ha ha)! sunsethill 2007.06.19 - 12:33PM 19: Nineteen--Behind Black Eyes Signed I have seen many stories which attempt to depict Snape's mental landscape and I think your view of it as an Escher drawing is brilliant. Just the thing for someone as twisty as Snape. And Hermione's not being very smart here, is she? She hasn't seen what led him to this betrayal. sheri22 2005.10.22 - 08:07PM 19: Nineteen--Behind Black Eyes Signed PLEASE! Update soon! Author's Response: I'm sorry, I'm sorry! A thousand apologies! School has kicked me firmly in the ass, and I'm not sure when I'll have time to update. Possibly the weekend of Remembrance Day, because the uni's closed for four whole days. But I promise the chapter will be awesome and long and awesome. Potions_Mistress 2005.10.18 - 07:06AM 19: Nineteen--Behind Black Eyes Signed Excellent chapter. Very intense. Can't wait for your next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Potions_Mistress 2005.10.18 - 07:02AM 19: Nineteen--Behind Black Eyes Signed Excellent chapter. Very intense. Can't wait for your next chapter. Author's Response: Ditto. Creative Deficit 2005.10.16 - 10:26PM 19: Nineteen--Behind Black Eyes Signed Ohh! Oh, dear! Oh me, oh my! Heh. Update soon! Please do! xo Author's Response: I'm going to try to update as soon as humanly possible. Which, due to a mass of midterms, history papers, statistics assignments and more midterms, may not be terribly soon. I'll do my best. The Grim 2005.10.15 - 04:48PM 19: Nineteen--Behind Black Eyes Signed wow, that was extremely intese and on the edge of your seat. your writing in this chapter was explicitly clear and stark. i could see almost all fo it readily in my mind's eye clear as day. now that takes some very powerful writing. poor severus, he's had so much happen to him. i really like your perspective of him finally breaking (however sad it might be) because the overall impression we get in the books and transferred into the fanfiction is that he is a strong, unwavering, and unbreakable man who does not feel pain, love, mercy, guilt, or sympathy for anyone. it is hard for hgss shippers/fans to portray severus in a such a vulnerable way, and you did it beautifully. i am anxious for your next update. i think i will contact you to get the update on your chapters, so i won't have to fret about iti daresay that this chapter is one of your best. -The Grim Author's Response: Whoo! Thanks! I'm sure glad you liked that chapter. I had lots of fun writing it. And yes, poor Severus. He's getting beat up quite a bit. And then some. But, interesting things to come in the next chapters as soon as I can pry the university's teeth out of my flesh. Adara 2005.10.07 - 11:32PM 19: Nineteen--Behind Black Eyes Signed Uh-oh, I hope GInny isn't a baddie. Author's Response: We'll see. We'll see. [Previous] 1 2 3 [Next]

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