Reviews for Nobody Told Me There'd Be Days Like These
| Betz | 2015.06.20 - 12:43PM | 3: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner | Signed |
| Nice lead on. It's Bast who is pregnant, not Hermione. Now if you could kindly remove that ring from my nose you put there during chapter 2... Great leading this reader around. Nicely wrapped up. |
| Betz | 2015.06.20 - 11:49AM | 2: Chapter 2: Having One's Cake | Signed |
| Poor Quirk. Only trying to be a good house-elf.
And I fear the vomiting is more than nerves and PTSD. I sense a pregnancy bombshell to be dropped in the Snape's lap in the last chapter.
Damn, now I want to whisk my husband away for reckless shagging in a fancy hotel room for the afternoon. |
| Betz | 2015.06.20 - 11:17AM | 1: Chapter 1: The Wedding Gifts | Signed |
| Oh dear. The Dowager Empress is on a tear and Hermione is in her path. Duck, girl! Com'on Hermione, find your spine and put your foot down, girl. |
| snapefan1983 | 2014.08.24 - 06:57PM | 2: Chapter 2: Having One's Cake | Signed |
| but Hermione wanted those changes surely yhe bhouse elf knew about the changes made on the house??? But something terrible had happened to the room at the top of the stairs.
The old ragged wallpaper, which featured faded red cabbage roses, was gone! The walls, which had been a dingy white, were now butter yellow, and some horrid paper featuring little cavorting woodland creatures mocked him from the far wall. The dilapidated red floor runner he remembered had been replaced with a tidy hooked rug in shades of saffron.
Oh, Quirk was a bad elf!
Firmly grasping the doorframe, Quirk smacked his head against the offending yellow wall.
The sharp pain brought him back to a sense of his immediate obligations. With a frown of concentration, he pictured the room as he had seen it on his first day. When he had every detail firmly fixed in his mind, he snapped his fingers, then peeked with hopeful eyes. Relief flooded his small body. Once again, the walls were a dingy white, with the torn cabbage rose paper on the far wall and the tatty old floor runner beneath his feet.
Quirk staggered out of the room at the top of the stairs, shuddering with delayed reaction as he pictured Master Snape in a rageful snit over the ruination of this room. Leaning against the wall in the hallway, he caught his breath and thanked his good luck that he had thought to inspect the house this morning. What if the changes had been discovered? It did not bear thinking about.
His breathing returned to normal, Quirk continued down the upstairs hallway to the small unused bedrooms and caused the bedroom doors to pop open at his approach. His cry of outrage at the sight of the bedrooms could be heard from the front walk. |
| snapefan1983 | 2014.08.24 - 06:43PM | 1: Chapter 1: The Wedding Gifts | Signed |
| “What are you looking at?” he asked lazily, letting his own gaze wander down to appreciate the small bit of cleavage revealed by the v-neck of the robes, and the swell beneath.
swelll beheath? I thought Hermione wasn't pregnant?? |
| Roleyc70 | 2009.09.16 - 02:03AM | 3: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner | Signed |
| A delightful series. You know I actually felt sorry for Lockhart when Quirk reverted the room and he thought he might be losing his mind again. Hahahaha! |
| BellatrixSnape | 2009.02.07 - 09:52AM | 3: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner | Signed |
| Have you ever considered turing the MOE series into just one story? (except Bast) It would be much easier to read that way. |
| purlwise | 2008.08.21 - 12:10AM | 3: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner | Signed |
| Clearly it has been said countless times before, and I'm late in reading the MoE series (prequel included), but here, what you have is probably the most hilarious series of events since "Noises Off" -- I saw this playing out on a stage. Each of the lines indicating a shift in perspective was literally a shift of my eyes from one part of the set to another, watching all these things happening, and scooting closer and closer to the edge of my seat every time something happened to Skeeter's jar! This is golden work.
I would say that, if you were so inclined, you should take the magic out of this story, write new backstory characters, and turn this into a three-act romantic stage comedy -- get yourself some credit where credit is due, and reap what you sow, and all that. This is brilliant, truly -- have enjoyed everything you've written without exception.
Best as you continue, Superversa ;) |
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