Reviews for A Choice of Roads
| southern_witch_69 | 2005.02.17 - 06:33AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
| very good chapter, i say! NO...Harry and Hermione weren't OOC. She always defends her actions...hmmm... is that the right word? lol.. And, Harry, well, he can be a right tosser at times, so he was fine as well. hehe... I am glad that Remus realizes now that Severus has honorable intentions towards Hermione. At least maybe someone won't give them a hard time. Another good chapter! I'm soo glad to see it back up! Cheers, doll |
| ook | 2005.02.11 - 12:22PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| It's not next month now, it's the month after. Please can we have some more? |
| Crashley | 2005.02.07 - 12:37AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Please please Please come back and update soon... What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to see Hermione rip into them!
I love your story!!! |
| Sniv | 2005.02.05 - 10:58AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Hope to see an update soon :-) |
| That Sad Song | 2005.02.04 - 05:52AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Oh, I do love this story so much! This was a very evil cliffhanger, indeed. I'm tired of Harry thinking it's all about him, and I do hope that Hermione gives him a piece of her mind!
On a merely techincal point, you seem to like using parentheses to mark sidenotes. I totally relate, as I also really like using parentheses to make off the cuff remarks. However, since you do use them quite frequently, you may want to switch things up a bit. Sometimes what you put in the parentheses can be marked off with commas, or you can use a sejura or m-dash (--) to denote these sidenotes. Or, you can just ignore what I'm saying and keep writing the lovely stuff you're writing! Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| larana | 2005.01.28 - 10:19PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| I love the character progression in the relationship. It is more realistic than most. Please post again soon :) |
| Lady Lynx | 2005.01.28 - 04:33AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| *mutter mutter* kill you for the Cliffy... *mutter mutter* have your head.. Keep writing, please! I particularly like how you describe Severus's need. I've always imagined him craving, needing, hungering for her, and opposed to being completely in control. It very good, update soon! |
| ljasell | 2005.01.27 - 09:50AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| This is such a romantic, realistic story, considering the characters.
The relationship pace you've taken with the characters seems realistic as well. I've followed your story for a long time...please post the next chapter soon. I like the way you describe your settings. : ) |
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