Reviews for A Choice of Roads
| Kheldar | 2005.02.17 - 10:11AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
| I think that you give yourself too little credit; Harry is just right in the confrontation scene. He is slowly becoming the person that Hermione saw in her vision, and sees things only in terms of himself. He sees himself as so large in Hermione's life that he CAN dictate what she will or will not do, and who she will/will not see. It's all about him, and it made a lot of sense. Hopefully the selfish prat will grow up soon! Good point in including the bit about Lockhart! Hermione was very controlled, very much the adult in that scene.
Not one of my favourite chapters but necessary and well written. I very much liked Hermione claiming Severus, however. The phrasing when the Animagus forms are used is a nice twist. Keep up the good work! |
| SidneySnape | 2005.02.17 - 09:57AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
| i'm so glad you updated. this is a very well written story and i love it. i hope the next one is in process. |
| Dryad | 2005.02.17 - 08:03AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
| thank you thank you! I've been waiting ever so patiently for you to update! I think you did well on the confrontation...Harry, good as he is, is a hothead...and you caught that. |
| June W | 2005.02.17 - 07:25AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
| Ack, that idiot Lupin! So he wants to talk again to Harry and Ron.... I hope Hermione loses her cool and hexes the three of them to the North Pole without their wands. At the very least, she should write her own letter to Remus so he can experience HER thoughts - or perhaps she should send a Howler, telling them her choice of boyfriend is none of their business. I'd love to see Hermione use her days off to visit Severus' house for some snogging! |
| ancientgirl | 2005.02.17 - 07:20AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
| While I agree with you and Harry would most probably not react in a reasonable way. I have to say I would have preferred Hermione give both he and Ron a reeming of their own. Friends or not, had someone acted like that towards me and someone I cared about, I would make it clear to them they were to stay out of my affairs, and I would not have been as nice as Hermione. But, she is trying to be the bigger person. I only hope they at least apologize to her for intruding. |
| leonie | 2005.02.17 - 07:03AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
| i had a strange feeling this morning that there might be a new chapter waiting, and i was right!! strange, huh? i think you did a good job with the confrontation scene, hermione certainly acted her age and it was a very believable/realistic argument. i also loved the rest, and let me tell you that it'll be very hard for me to wait until you finished the next part. what on earth will H&R&R do now? once again, this story is wonderful! |
| leonie | 2005.02.17 - 07:03AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
| i had a strange feeling this morning that there might be a new chapter waiting, and i was right!! strange, huh? i think you did a good job with the confrontation scene, hermione certainly acted her age and it was a very believable/realistic argument. i also loved the rest, and let me tell you that it'll be very hard for me to wait until you finished the next part. what on earth will H&R&R do now? once again, this story is wonderful! |
| ladyofthemasque | 2005.02.17 - 06:46AM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
More, please. And a lot sooner than this particular installment came along, if you please, since you purportedly promised this one to arrive *last* month...
Nope: on second thought, if we--your fans--please. More, please! ~Lotm |
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