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midwife_witch2006.07.31 - 05:38AM26: Be My Guest, Part 1Signed
I hope they're still this sweet with each other after they have "gone to Severus' house" (ahem). Great anticipation building, though; this is one of those stories where I think I'm almost going to be sad when they finally sleep together because the build-up has been so satisfying. Okay, now that I've stayed up all night reading this, I'm going to try and squeeze in an hour of sleep before I have to go to work. Ah, the trials and tribulations of fanfiction addicts...

midwife_witch2006.07.31 - 04:06AM21: Defending a HeartSigned
Hmmm... Haven't seen much of ALL CAPS HARRY since OOTP and I can't say I've missed him. Harry does feel pretty OOC to me in this chapter, but it's your story, so do with him what you will. (Although I really hate the idea of him becoming some cold Ministry power hound as he ages, but again, it's your story.)

ladyofthemasque2006.07.31 - 03:12AM26: Be My Guest, Part 1Signed
Squee! You updated! Pout! You didn't update enough of the story! Growl! Write more, so your fanatical readers can squee some more, capiche? ~Lotm ;-D

Author's Response: Thanks! I posted the second part that contains um, cuddling and certain other things, but it's still in the queue. However, both parts are up at ff.net... enjoy!

midwife_witch2006.07.31 - 03:11AM18: It Rained After AllSigned
I don't usually like to give "Awwws" because they don't tell the author much, but awwww.... That was sweet with Hermione transforming. I also am really enjoying the way you show Severus' struggle with this new side of himself. Most fanfic authors would have hade them in bed and Hermione pregnant by now. Don't get me wrong - that can be fun, too. However, a restrained Severus makes for an intriguing change of pace.

Author's Response: Thanks for that!

midwife_witch2006.07.31 - 02:15AM14: That Which MattersSigned
Oh, I don't know - that speech ranks right up there with Mr. Darcy, at least (which, coming from an Austen lover like me, is high praise indeed). It teeters right on the edge of being too OOC, but in the end, it works. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks, that's very kind of you to say that *smiles*.

midwife_witch2006.07.31 - 12:43AM2: Fools for LoveSigned
This is good so far, but can we please just agree to a ban on Dumbledore twinkling? Honestly, the man twinkles more here on Ashwinder than the Christmas tree lights do every winter at Rockefeller Center (Sorry to rant - it's a pet peeve of mine.).

Author's Response: Thanks for that! Sorry, I was unable to resist the Dumbledore-twinkling (wasn't strong enough ;-) ).

Rubyfey2006.07.31 - 12:37AM26: Be My Guest, Part 1Signed
Ah, so sweet! So they're BOTH nervous as to how they'll be seen / accepted by the other? Even after both have made clear they love the other? I hope this visit to his (soon to be "hers" as well???) home will "cement" the relationship and remove all doubts, permanetly! (I'm also hoping something "else" will be cemented---just what "was" it Severus retrieved from the family vault? Let's see, wasn't that a JADE engagement ring Hermione saw on her finger, in the future visions?) And of course, he's got to show her his roses, and the maze his own family built, that was so very superior to the one at the Retreat. Oh, I hope they have a Loooonnnnggg weekend together!!! (squees in delight)

And, I hope Part 2 will be an equally LONG and satisfying chapter. Do you have it already written, and just awaiting Mod approval? If so, --- HURRY UP OUT THERE, dear Mods---please? And if you're still working on it, what's your favorite encouragement / inducement that we can send your way? Thoughts? Prayers? Hugs? Bribes (chocolate, candy, tens and twenties)??? ;[)

Do please serve up that promised "dessert" of lemon pie really, really soon, ok?

STILL lovin' it,

Rubyfey

Author's Response: Thanks for that! Yes, they still feel a bit nervous... but don't worry too much! (smile) Part 2 must still be floating in the queue as I had posted it together with part 1... however, it has been posted on ff.net. I hope you enjoy it...


mekareami2006.07.30 - 11:08PM26: Be My Guest, Part 1Signed
Very pleased to see an update :) I hope RL cooperates in letting the next one come soon! Thank you for writing

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