Reviews for A Choice of Roads
ElectricBloo | 2008.03.28 - 10:50PM | 25: Drawing Closer | Signed |
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ElectricBloo | 2008.03.28 - 08:29PM | 24: No Turning Back | Signed |
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ElectricBloo | 2008.03.28 - 07:22PM | 23: Looking Ahead | Signed |
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ElectricBloo | 2008.03.28 - 04:55PM | 22: Catch me if you can! | Signed |
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ElectricBloo | 2008.03.28 - 03:59PM | 21: Defending a Heart | Signed |
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ElectricBloo | 2008.03.28 - 02:20PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
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bellasol67 | 2008.03.28 - 01:29PM | 30: Breakfast with a Slytherin | Signed |
I was so excited to see this updated. The lemons are nice and I like the cat barrier charm...but my favorite part is the dialogue between the two. And even Snape's internal dialogue. Very nice. |
inthedesk | 2008.03.27 - 11:25PM | 22: Catch me if you can! | Signed |
I'm enjoying your story. It always amazes me when someone can create something original. However, some of your sentences are awkward. Its like you're trying too hard to be descriptive You use everu word or phrase available., which is very destracting and confusing. Sometimes I have to read something more than once before I can figure out what you're trying to communicate. Please keep writing, I'm enjoying the story. |
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