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Reviews for A Choice of Roads

Jong_Kahn2021.10.16 - 01:34AM7: Slips in TimeSigned
Quite a jolt for not only those students affected by Trelawney's salve, but for us, too! Got to find out more!

Jong_Kahn2021.10.16 - 01:26AM6: DetentionSigned
Ah, that Dumbledore sees all, knows all--and he sees you blowing it all up, Severus. Better get wise!

Jong_Kahn2021.10.16 - 12:51AM4: The Third VisionSigned
There's the line that will wake you up when you're ready to see it, Hermione: "...remember there is a difference between being wanted and being loved.” Yes!

Jong_Kahn2021.10.16 - 12:38AM2: Fools for LoveSigned
Another well-characterized chapter! One minor quibble, which is down on line 23 (beginning "Hermione was furious."), the third sentence in, the second phrase. Instead of " – he had stammered his apology to her in such a heartfelt way it was impossible not to be angry with him", I think you meant "..it was impossible TO be angry with him." Otherwise that sentence is saying she HAD to be angry with him, since it was impossible NOT to be angry. But another "10" for your otherwise perfect writing...!

Jong_Kahn2021.10.16 - 12:25AM1: RevelationsSigned
Nicely believable beginning. You started this story, this very chapter, before I ever began here at Ashwinder. I look forward to being able to read the entire thing through to completion.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review so far. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. :)

Inspire2021.10.13 - 07:06PM35: Circle CompletingSigned
All was well. Yay! I'm so pleased to see a final chapter. I'll have to go back and re-read now that you've wrapped it up. I've enjoyed this story very much and kept track of it here and on ff . net over the years. It's a lovely look at how our dear couple could come together and build a solid relationship. Well done ♥

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. ^_^ I'm glad I finally got it finished.

lilymunster2021.09.25 - 09:34AM32: Explorations (part 2)Signed
They forgot the contraceptive potion when they made love outdoors. I wonder what will happen next.

Amortentia2021.06.01 - 10:05AM34: Departing and ArrivingSigned
This story is one of my favorites! You have brought so many characters to life and added much to their world ( like Severus’ sentient home). Most enjoyable. I hope that you are feeling better. Chronic illness is so unpredictable and saps your strength and will. I am recovering from leukemia and understand. May your spirit carry you through the tough times. You have helped me through your writing. Thank you! I hope that you continue this story. I would love to see how you weave this story like a beautiful tapestry.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. I hope you feel much better soon. I still have chronic fatigue but there are good days as well as bad (as you probably know). Some good news - I have written the final chapter of 'Roads' and I'm waiting to hear back from my beta. I wanted to wrap things up, for me and the readers. :) I hope you will like it.

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