Reviews for The Darkness In Men's Hearts
| gelipie | 2020.10.05 - 11:48AM | 5: The Darkness In Her Heart | Signed |
| Please sir, may I have some more? |
| snapefan1983 | 2017.08.21 - 06:27PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| only her cat ? to take with her what of her other stuff i mean if she leaves the atttic and goes back to the school !!!?? “ There is always a significant chance that I may not return. The house is warded as heavily as I can manage. Ah – here is your wretched animal,” he smirked, remembering her previous outburst. “Yes, the house is heavily warded, and the doors will be locked. Do not leave unless I have not returned or you are under attack, as it would be most inconvenient to have to kidnap you again.”
He turned, and picked up the travelling cloak, which she now saw had a mask attached to the hood…
“Be careful.”
He turned at the top of the stairs before descending and gave her a half-smirk. “Now, now, Miss Granger, I think it’s a bit early for you to manifest symptoms of the Stockholm Syndrome. Keep that one for later.”
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| snapefan1983 | 2017.08.21 - 06:00PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| forget my last comment |
| snapefan1983 | 2017.08.21 - 05:59PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| he should have taken her luggage too with them when he kidnapped her |
| thea560 | 2017.01.12 - 01:03PM | 5: The Darkness In Her Heart | Signed |
| Love it! Very interesting plot line and perfect characterisation :) Sad it will not be finished. |
| loreen77 | 2017.01.11 - 01:32PM | 5: The Darkness In Her Heart | Signed |
| This story was an excellent idea, and very interesting to read. While I know it will never be finished, I'm glad I read what you have so far. |
| loreen77 | 2017.01.11 - 10:14AM | 1: The Gift | Signed |
| Interesting start. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2016.04.13 - 01:38AM | 5: The Darkness In Her Heart | Signed |
| I had thought that Snape's remark at the end of the previous chapter re Stockholm Syndrome was a bit premature, but perhaps he was on the right track after all. Still, I wondered what spell he had used to make her see both Harry and Ron as DEs in the last paragraph, before he dispelled it with 'Finite Incantatem'. I am very sorry that we won't be getting any more of this story. I shall favorite it anyway, as a fragment I don't wish to lose, even if unfinished. Yet another "10", and I'm sorry (though I understand your reasons) that there won't be more. Thanks for all your work.
Maybe you could revisit it form the other end as two adults, after it's come out all right, and work it back, to show how they got out okay? (Just a suggestion!) Come back and write more Snape in another story--you have a deft, memorable characterization that feels 'right'. Thanks again--and another "10". |
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