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| loreen77 | 2015.06.10 - 01:47PM | 1: Fractured Shadows of the Soul | Signed |
| Amazing insight to his thoughts. Very well written.. | |||
| Harmony Bites | 2008.02.29 - 06:29AM | 1: Fractured Shadows of the Soul | Signed |
| Your professor be damned. First person *can* be clunky in fic, if you don't get the tone just right. But I liked this one, the present tense and some fine turns of praise give it a nice lyricism. | |||
| Sara Lady Dalian | 2005.11.29 - 09:36AM | 1: Fractured Shadows of the Soul | Signed |
| Beautiful image at the end. I wonder if something like this will truly happen. He seems to be the kind of person who will end up in a deep, dark hole that he can't escape even if there is no one preventing it. *sigh... unfortunately. Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sara Lady Dalian. Snape has definitely always struck me as someone who has dug themselves into a mental ‘deep, dark hole’ made only worse by the actions of both Dumbledore and Voldemort. It would take some effort on someone else’s part to get him out of there in the end. I’m afraid, though, that JKR will kill him in final book instead. Ah, well, that’s what fanfic is for. | |||
| Guinnevere | 2005.11.16 - 05:04PM | 1: Fractured Shadows of the Soul | Signed |
| This is my second read, and I like it, although it makes me want some resolution of Severus' dilemma. (Somehow, dilemma looks spelled wrong to me, but oh, well. Too lazy to look it up just now.) I look forward to the companion piece you told another reviewer that you plan to write. Whatever canon does to these two, I believe the fans in this 'ship have the better idea. Author's Response: Currently I am working on a follow-up piece from Hermione’s POV, but I’m afraid the dilemma (seems spelled right to me ;-) won’t be resolved until the third part. Real-life has been slowing me down for the past 2 months, but I hope to have both pieces finished in the next several weeks. I don’t believe canon can hurt this ‘ship all that much, it’s just too much fun, but it does mean a change in the seventh year head-girl mentality. We simply have to be more creative. Thank you for the review. | |||
| Valheru | 2005.10.26 - 07:15AM | 1: Fractured Shadows of the Soul | Signed |
| I must agree with your Literature instructor. I usually hate anything written in the first-person present tense because it takes a lot of skill to make it sound 'nice' (smooth for want of a better word), but you've used that particular perspective very well. I enjoyed the fic a lot. Even if it does become AU could you please consider expanding it (pretty pretty please coated in chocolate)? Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Valheru. Actually, I prefer not writing in first-person either, but it does have the advantage of immediately getting ‘into their head’, which is what seemed to fit best with Snape. Currently I am working on the follow-up from Hermione’s POV, but I find her much harder to write in the first-person. She just doesn’t have the dark angst of Snape. :-> Hopefully it will be ready soon. | |||
| Keladry Lupin | 2005.09.01 - 07:16PM | 1: Fractured Shadows of the Soul | Anonymous |
| Just re-read this for the tenth time (at least). As always, I am struck by the beauty of your words and insight. I know you said you would probably leave it as is, but I'd love to learn what Hermione's thinking and going through there, especially as at least some of it likely pertains to Professor Snape. Is there something I could bribe you with, to get you to give us Hermione's take on this scene? Author's Response: Chocolate? No, bribery is not necessary :-> I am actually working on a Hermione POV, but it has a somewhat lighter feel, so I’ll most likely post it as a follow up piece instead of as second chapter. She does indeed have some thoughts on our dear professor. It will be several weeks though; I have a few other pieces I’d like to finish first. Thanks for such a sweet review Keladry! | |||
| Emerald | 2005.08.29 - 07:00AM | 1: Fractured Shadows of the Soul | Signed |
| Well written. You see the Inner Secret desires of Snape... he came so close yet so far. Sad, really. This story basically says to me, "He Who Hesitates is Lost". I was in the hope that he would speak his thoughts, but then, it would become like any other SS/HG story.
I like this very much, you ve done well.
Cheers
Emerald. Author's Response: Thank you, Emerald. I’ve always imagined Snape as being rather practical, and while war-time relationships can be quite romantic, Snape would likely not believe it was possible, at least for him. I like seeing them together and happy too, but it just didn’t seem realistic for this scene. | |||
| sheri22 | 2005.08.23 - 02:52PM | 1: Fractured Shadows of the Soul | Signed |
| awesome.. I really liked this one! Author's Response: Wow, I don’t think any of my drabbles have ever been called awesome before ;-) Thanks for the review sheri, I’m glad you liked it. | |||
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