Reviews for Softly.... Gracefully
kamelia | 2006.09.14 - 01:07PM | 1: Severus Thoughts of Her | Signed |
very well done, just lovely.
~kamelia~
Author's Response: Thank you very much.... |
Guinnevere | 2005.10.01 - 02:07AM | 1: Severus Thoughts of Her | Signed |
I like the emotion here. Ever thought of writing a sonnet, just for the exercise?
Author's Response: I do that often... Thank you...I am trying to update and add more.. |
droxy | 2005.09.12 - 11:12PM | 1: Severus Thoughts of Her | Signed |
lovely
Author's Response: Thanks Droxy, |
southern_witch_69 | 2005.08.02 - 06:21PM | 1: Severus Thoughts of Her | Signed |
I love the way he describes her
Author's Response: Blushes, I will let him know that..
Author's Response: Blushes, I will let him know that.. |
Kiwiwannabe23 | 2005.07.21 - 02:16AM | 1: Severus Thoughts of Her | Signed |
Wow...that took my breath away. Lovely. :)
Author's Response: I love getting reviews seldom get them though... But love them when i do recieve them. |
Kiwiwannabe23 | 2005.07.21 - 02:16AM | 1: Severus Thoughts of Her | Signed |
Wow...that took my breath away. Lovely. :)
Author's Response: thank you, sorry the delay. |
Cherdy the Molologist | 2005.07.16 - 02:29PM | 1: Severus Thoughts of Her | Signed |
wow. very nice.
Author's Response: thank you |
snapesbbwlover | 2005.07.16 - 09:29AM | 1: Severus Thoughts of Her | Signed |
Charming, well done. I hope to see more from you.
just one thing...'Skilled but pliable to the hand that caress her,'
it should be either
Skilled but pliable to the hand that caresses her,
or
Skilled but pliable to the hands that caress her,
Author's Response: Skilled but pliable to the hands that caress her, this is the correct line...will be correct the peom its elf later tonight... thank you |
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