Reviews for Forget Me Not
Kayree | 2005.07.02 - 03:48AM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
hey this is a realli good story. i like the idea and u write well. i dont mind that u only see severus's point of view. i agree with u; it does add to the mood and the way the story sounds. good story, great writing. i cant wait until u update again.
Love & Luck,
Kayree
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! |
Chartreuse | 2005.07.02 - 03:48AM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
Well you are doing the angst very well, I felt really sad in this chapter, very sad for Severus; not having love for a long time then losing it - kind of.
Author's Response: That is really nice to hear. This is my first attempt at angst. Thanks for reading! |
scully_m_ | 2005.07.02 - 03:06AM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
Ah... how sweet. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! |
Vickie211 | 2005.07.02 - 02:48AM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
I am so loving this story! Keeping it in Severus’ POV is definitely the right way to go. It helps to illustrate his frustration, and keeps the reader inside his head. Besides, you’re managing to show us some of Hermione’s feelings through her actions, what she says, and what other people say about her. I like the way you’re showing us the past a little at a time, and that it’s a mystery as well. That was a really cool reason for Severus to tell it in pieces – to try to keep Hermione interested. Can’t wait for more!
Author's Response: Its partly to keep you interested as well. My goal is to keep past and present somewhat parallel but with roles reversed. Hope it works. Thanks for reading! |
jennyjo | 2005.07.02 - 12:33AM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
This is interesting story. Looking forward to more chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading jennyjo! |
seamermaiden | 2005.07.01 - 10:22PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
nice this could build to be a very interesting fic
Author's Response: I certainly hope so. Thanks for reading! |
Deeble | 2005.07.01 - 09:22PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
Oh -- and I laughed out loud at S.A.D.N.E.S.S.!
Author's Response: Some of my best stuff comes from laying in bed in morning in that half awake half still asleep state. This was from one of those times. Thanks for reading! |
Deeble | 2005.07.01 - 09:21PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
I think it's the right decision to limit this story to Snape's point of view. This is not simply a whodunnit, it's a story about how they fell in love and how Snape now has to recreate the situation in a way he can manage. He doesn't know how she feels; he doesn't know her well in this incarnation at all. We can understand him better if we're stuck with him.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that people agree with me on this. I was a little worried about it feeling claustrophobic, but I think he'll be out and about enough to counteract that. And of course it works for me too for the most part. Thanks so much! I love getting reviews from you. |
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