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Reviews for What Good Comes of Memories

verasuspense2010.05.09 - 03:37PM8: Re-acquaintingSigned
I should think a portkey would create a sonic boom, as air rushes in to fill the vacuum formerly occupied by the bodies of the portkeyers.

greenwood2010.01.15 - 11:52PM8: Re-acquaintingSigned
I'm glad to see Hermione and Ron make some amends towards a closer friendship. I could never imagine them really getting too far apart. I thought it was pretty funny when Ron knocked Snape out. I bet he would have liked doing that!

vennela12006.02.06 - 01:28PM8: Re-acquaintingSigned
hey... portkeys don't make noise..... apparation does... :-) anyway.. its a real nice story I love it....

Run Wild2005.07.03 - 08:10AM8: Re-acquaintingSigned
I have just read the whole lot straight through and have enjoyed every moment. The mystery/thriller aspect gives this fic a tremendous ‘must read on’ quality. The budding romance is also compelling: throwing a couple who aren’t sure whether they like or hate each other together is always dynamic and entertaining. And thank you so much for writing a decent portrayal of Ron. I had almost come to despair of ever finding one. I do hope you will continue to write this, as I very much want to know what happens next, and how your characters will solve the many problems they face. It has been a real treat.

Zhaneraal2005.06.28 - 12:57PM8: Re-acquaintingSigned
I'm really enjoying this, and am looking forward to reading more.

Novinha2005.06.28 - 07:00AM8: Re-acquaintingSigned
Dearest Aphrodeia<

I really like your way of dealing with the plot. The plot thickens just superbly. It's gripping and interesting and I am truly anxious as to what happens next - and when someone follows as many WiPs as I do (more than 30 right now) this is a good thing - for in many stories as much as I want to see more, I am not really wondering as to the outcome. I want to see what your characters will do.

As to the originality of the plot - there is nothing wrong with borrowing :) We all work with ideas that someone has already used before. :)
And your style is absolutely fabulous. It is visible you are careful about what you write. You don't throw things randomly, each sentense has a meaning - and may yet prove our clue. At least that's what iot feels to me.
Greetings from Poland,
Novinha

Amoreaux Escroc2005.06.27 - 10:27PM8: Re-acquaintingSigned
Nice. This is very well written, and I like the way the story is going. I also particularly liked your jab to our world news...because isn't that the truth?

snarkypants2005.06.27 - 02:33PM8: Re-acquaintingSigned
Very, very nice. And thanks for using 'strangle' instead of 'choke.' You can 'choke' on a chocolate bar, for goodness' sake, whereas 'strangling' someone is done with intent to harm them, or to protect oneself, as you've done here (Okay, putting the former-battered-women's-shelter-worker back in her box). I love her interactions with Ron and Snape in these chapters.

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