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Pagan_angel2005.06.23 - 03:58PM1: He Wears His Cloak Like Moonlight Wears the NightsAnonymous
Amazing - absolutely amazing.....

Purificatus2005.06.23 - 02:17PM1: He Wears His Cloak Like Moonlight Wears the NightsSigned
25 House Points to the House of your residence, or you may donate to another House that could use a boost. (And I happen to agree about Gerard Butler--Mmmmm<*drools*>) And yes, forgot to mention that the title line is also one of my favorites. Regards, --Purificatus

Kiefer2005.06.23 - 12:26PM1: He Wears His Cloak Like Moonlight Wears the NightsSigned
Beautiful. (Although a bit fluffy.) I really like the metaphor/imagry of the title line.

Purificatus2005.06.23 - 11:14AM1: He Wears His Cloak Like Moonlight Wears the NightsSigned
Oh, my God--Beautiful, tragic, *PERFECT*! Oh, the imagery! Wow! I find it hard to pick a favorite line, though I can try...
"I made so many choices long ago, when I was young with thoughts aflame with ire. I can’t erase those choices even though they kill the dreams to which I now aspire." Oooooh, angsty!

"She tells me in her heart I’ll find a home. Can it be true that I am not alone?"

House points if you can tell me what the following's from, but it just sounded so *apropos*...

--"It's in your soul that true distortion lies...
Pitiful creature of darkness . . . What kind of life have you known . . .?

God give me courage to show you you are not alone . . .

The entirety of "Hermione Watches" just breaks my heart! And the last two are just beautiful reflections upon the characters and their relationship--Impossible to pick a favorite line!

Regards, --Purificatus


Author's Response: How many housepoints do I get for knowing the answer if Phantom of the Opera? *Gerard Butler....rowr...* I'm glad you liked it - thanks for letting me know.

samhan2005.06.23 - 09:45AM1: He Wears His Cloak Like Moonlight Wears the NightsSigned
My, those are wonderful! I've never before read FF-poetry, firmly believing I'd not like it -- I' never guessed that I could like HP-FFs at all, for that matter, until I stumbled over Ashwinder. But your sonnets are very sweet, enchanting and endearing, and I fully intend to wear a smile all day just for remembering them. You've done great work. Thanks for making reading FF worthwhile!

Author's Response: What a nice review! I'm glad you enjoyed them - and thank you for reading them.

sophierom2005.06.23 - 09:08AM1: He Wears His Cloak Like Moonlight Wears the NightsSigned
These are lovely ... and they make me crave more of "Finding His Voice". :-D Hope you are doing well, and thanks for sharing this. Best, Sophie

Author's Response: It's coming, I promise! It's written in my head, it's just a matter of finding the time to actually type it out!

Miri Tiazan2005.06.23 - 07:31AM1: He Wears His Cloak Like Moonlight Wears the NightsSigned
Aw. I love these. I especially love your title line--"like moonlight wears the nights." That's so clever, and so poetic. I also love the couplet at the end of that same sonnet--it's so true, and so well-phrased. Nicely done.

Author's Response: That's my favorite end couplet too - LOL. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed them!

Keladry Lupin2005.06.23 - 02:13AM1: He Wears His Cloak Like Moonlight Wears the NightsSigned
Glorious. Angst, redemption, love, loneliness, and life, all rolled into these gorgeous sonnets. You've done some lovely work here, Michmak!

Author's Response: Thank you - I was trying to tell a short story with the sonnets and I hope I succeeded.

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