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Reviews for Where Your Loyalties Lie

llylou2005.06.20 - 04:19PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
I usually don't like Dark Severus, but the fact that he feels more her than he will admit and that Hermione basicaly did to him what he was planning to do to her really made me love this story.

Author's Response: Sneaky!Hermione is always good with Dark!Severus! I'm really glad that you liked it. I think he's a little smitten myself--simply doesn't recognize it. :)

Selene2005.06.20 - 03:58PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
*giggles* loved it!

Author's Response: thanks!

bunny_wigglesworth2005.06.20 - 03:18PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
Very nice... I don't usually like Severus with such twisted loyalties, but this was nicely done, and it looks as though he may be redeemed in spite of himself. -bw

Author's Response: thanks. Sort of a redemption type thing going, yes. Glad you saw it that way. i had fun with it. :)

Sniv2005.06.20 - 02:54PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
Evil!Southern glides away. Do I detect a hint of a (positive)Dementor attitude here? lol!!! =)

Author's Response: giggle! too right!

GinnyW2005.06.20 - 02:40PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
I loved this story! You never really know what Severus is really thinking...ugh, he can be so nasty. I like how Hermione twisted everything around on him. ;-) Well done! ~Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks, doll. I like the sneakiness in both of them. I wonder if he's fooled her as much as he thinks. I doubt it. lol... nasty sev = mauhahaha... xoox, doll

nesscafe2005.06.20 - 02:21PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
That was fantastic! I love this Dark Severus. He's not too soft, but he does have an obvious affection for her (even if he doesn't see it himself). I like how Hermione orchestrated everhting behind his back. I love how in the end he tries to say he loves her and she tells him not to. It's almost like she really does know him better then he knows himself. He thinks she's read him all wrong, but I think she's just a much more clever manipulator! She tells him what she thinks will make him feel in charge, so she can have the man she loves. Wow! What a story!

Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! I do appreciate that you took the time to have a read. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really liike Dark!Severus as well. I think he cares more for her than he admits--just as you said. You have simply nailed this so perfectly. That makes me feel as though I've done my job!

I don't think she's as "fooled" as he'd like to believe--especially not after she went through all that behind the scenes stuff. Thanks so much. Cheers :)

pickles2005.06.20 - 02:10PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
I'll have to email this to hubby... Again great story.

Author's Response: yay! thanks. tell him hello and let me know what he thinks. oh, and tell him sorry, no succubus around.

pickles2005.06.20 - 02:09PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
I like Hermione pulling most of it over Snape. Dumbledore was probably running low on his lemon drops and was ready to get out of hiding.. Yes Snape did pull thhe last one over her in this but with them being bound together forever I have a feeling he eventually had feelings for her.. Those chapters were great. Thank you for the new story.. patty

Author's Response: thanks, doll. I'm thinking he does have feelings but doesn't realize it--not truly anyway. We had 20k limit on the story, so when I wrote, I felt rushed and cramped. I would have loved to have been able to take my time with it, build things up. This works too though. thanks for following. Cheers xoxo

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