Reviews for Where Your Loyalties Lie
Lyndie578 | 2005.06.20 - 11:40PM | 2: Where Your Loyalties Lie | Signed |
Great twists and turns! Thanks for writing and, of course, posting this fic on Ashwinder. Congratulations on your Honorable Mention! Auror Hermione, so calculating. Way to out think a Slytherin! Go, Hermione, get your man! Severus needs all the help he can get.
Author's Response: teehee! too right. Thanks for reading. i appreciate the review as well. It's fun to write and know that people actually enjoy your story. |
queenp | 2005.06.20 - 09:05PM | 2: Where Your Loyalties Lie | Signed |
wow...interesting story...liked the way you wrote the dark Severus...well done...Congrats...
Author's Response: thanks, doll. I appreciate the review.. i simply had fun with this. between snape and sneaky hermione near the end.. muahahaha |
Horserider | 2005.06.20 - 08:25PM | 2: Where Your Loyalties Lie | Signed |
Nah, I think the manipulation is all Hermione! Severus had it right in one when he called *that* Slytherin a snake, for sure! Makes me feel like we'd better be watching our slippery snakey friends even closer come Book 6! Thanks for a neat story and an apt way to answer that particularly tough challenge! :D ~HR
Author's Response: Teehee...Thanks for having a read, doll. Good to know you're still kicking. How's the foal coming? Not much longer til our book comes out! Thanks goodness. The closer it gets, the worse the anticipation grows. |
lemonade8 | 2005.06.20 - 07:53PM | 2: Where Your Loyalties Lie | Signed |
You did so well with bad Severus! Hermione is my hero! LOL!!! Atta girl-- way to manage your troublesome man!
Thanks, that was great.
Author's Response: teehee.. thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. Hermione was very sneaky.. muahahaha |
Bambu | 2005.06.20 - 07:51PM | 2: Where Your Loyalties Lie | Signed |
You did a nice job fulfilling all the requirements for this piece, and you rendered Severus' duplicity quite plausibly. I particularly enjoyed his internal monologue while Hermione's reciting the 'significant events' during her school years. It was a fun point and counter-point.
Author's Response: thanks so much! I had so much fun with this! His comments about her years of knowing him was fun for me. "Oh! Do go on!" glad you liked mah sordid tale! Cheers |
Maggie | 2005.06.20 - 06:20PM | 2: Where Your Loyalties Lie | Signed |
Excellent! Very creative!
Author's Response: thanks, doll! |
lovethelab | 2005.06.20 - 05:48PM | 2: Where Your Loyalties Lie | Signed |
Great story Southern! I really loved Evil Severus. And I think Hermione is just being the perfect wife - - let your husband think he is in charge and he'll be happy! I personally think she does know how he feels and is trying to change his mind in much the same way he would have tried to change hers. Just another wonderful story flowinf from the tip of your quill!
Author's Response: thanks so much. I really enjoyed it! I wish that I would have had more to it (the buildup to their relationship, etc.) but there is nothing wrong with a little quickie story, I suppose. Thanks for reading doll. I appreciate the reivews and that you seem to follow my work. You pegged Hermione perfectly. I think she's not as 'fooled' as he believes. :) |
Satoni | 2005.06.20 - 05:14PM | 2: Where Your Loyalties Lie | Signed |
hehe....
I've been waiting for this one, knowing u've yet to dissapoint me with one of ur fics....again....you did a tremendous job. I don't really read much other that romance, but this was....breathtaking. The moment I saw a new story was up, I checked it out.:) and I really really really liked it.:) you write the best dark!Severus ever!
Cheers,
Snibbles
Author's Response: thanks, doll. I'm glad that you liked this one. I'm more of a romance type as well. :) But, there is something about the allure of Dark!Severus-teehee! glad you had a read. cheers! |
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