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Reviews for Where Your Loyalties Lie

Mouse2005.06.21 - 02:17PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
No I don't think he was toooo soft. Just right. So he really doesn't lover her just the sex. lol what man doesn't hehe. Great twist at the end having Hermione fix everything. I do have one question though, Dumbledor gave her the time turner so that she could fix everything, so he knew of sev's underhandedness? Because Hermione said that she didn't know, and was confused. All in all it was a wonderful story. Party favors to you. :D

Author's Response: thanks, doll. i'm really liking this snape though. he loves her, but he just doesnt realize it. they've both attempted to pull the wool on the other.. hehe glad you enjoyed

Lady Norskstar2005.06.21 - 06:49AM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
Great story. Really enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: thanks. i'm glad you liked it!

Vickie2112005.06.21 - 02:45AM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
Fantastic! You write a most delicious Dark!Severus – and an even better Sneaky!Hermione. I think she out-Slytherin’d the Slytherin. In fact, I think she’s on top of everything. She knows he loves her, even if he doesn’t think he does. Maybe she even knows about the Obliviate, since she was so uninhibited the second time. Maybe that’s what made her see him clearly and decide how to handle him. Either way, I loved it. And congratulations on the Honorable Mention!

Author's Response: thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. You know, it's possible that she figured out the Obliviate. thanks!!!!!

Red Writing Hood2005.06.21 - 02:14AM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
ohhh...great story. Loved the big bad Severus...well, semi dark Severus...well...you know what I mean. Red

Author's Response: teehee... thanks!!

Mouse2005.06.21 - 02:12AM1: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
Wow what a twisting plot this is. It's very good. It almost reminds me of that dallas, who killed JR thing lol. I can't believe he was working for the dark all along. Or was he? Did Dumbledor just make him think he was??? Who set up Severus? Does Hermione Truly love him? Great job. On to part two. :D Well done my dear, and congrats on the nomination. ;)

Author's Response: glad you are liking so far. i happen to see that you are wiht the next chapter already... so i'll leave this and go to that one

triskell2005.06.21 - 02:08AM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
Excellent chapter, as always :) Your Severus is excellent. I love it when he is so dark in a story. I don't thinl he is too soft. I loved when his reply was "and, I"... Never thought about that.

Author's Response: thanks, doll. glad u liked (didnt recognize you hehe). That and I bit was pretty slick. teehee

cocoachristy2005.06.21 - 12:14AM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
I absolutely LOVED this story! I will stand by what I say and declare that nobody writes Severus Snape like you do, or as well as you do, Sun! I love how this story played out. I love how he never really truely tells her he loves her, I love how he puts himself first, I love how even when she saved him, he still was thinking about himself and his own interests!!! I enjoyed Hermione with a little Slytherin in her, Slytherin enough to pull one over on Severus, although I dare say, he will be watching her more closely now! This fic was totally awesome and I look forward to everything else you write in the future!!! Smooches!!

Author's Response: thanks, doll. i do so appreciate your input! I love pairing a sneaky!Severus with a sneaky!Hermione. xoxoxo love ((((((( for all the encouragement)))))))

Gardengrrl132005.06.20 - 11:45PM2: Where Your Loyalties LieSigned
Devious, utterly devious... but I like it! This fic is absolutely great. I like that Hermione did unto him. I like that he got to off Alastor Moody. *grin* I also like his try at saying I love you. *snort!* I also like Hermione's reaction. Great job, as usual!
GG

Author's Response: thanks, doll. i'm glad you liked it. Hermione was sneaky as well. Moody seemed an easy target hehe... cheers!!

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