Reviews for Before the Dawn
| duj | 2021.11.17 - 07:06AM | 12: Two Sides | Signed |
| I find the idea that peter pettigrew was the most unlikely person to be rather odd, TBH, given that it made perfect sense to Sirius in hindsight:
"But you, Peter - I'll never understand why I didn't see you were the spy from the start. You always liked big friends to look after you, didn't you? ... you never did anything for anyone unless you could see what was in it for you ... You'd want to be sure he (Voldy) was the biggest bully in the playground before you went back to him..." and of course his Animagus form was a rat.
Of course, in the Order it was only the other Marauders who knew that about him. But still. Why *wouldn't* people distrust "a weak talentless thing", a coward, with more powerful friends? Surely the textbook example of likely-traitor. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2021.06.22 - 04:02AM | 42: Three Words | Signed |
| Why the hell didn't Hermione tell Severus about Lucius' forceful threats with his cane/wand?!? If she couldn't bring herself to talk about it, she could have had Severus bring out the Pensieve, or use Legilimancy on her. I hope this was not a huge mistake on her part, not telling him. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2021.06.22 - 01:45AM | 40: Keayney | Signed |
| Another reader who wept during this chapter. The chapter heading was perfectly appropriate. Well done, you. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2021.06.21 - 01:03PM | 23: Two Words | Signed |
| "...she heard rustling in the corner again, but was too preoccupied to turn and see the source of the noise crossing the floor." WHAT?! Hermione! Find out who the F it is!! I suspect Peter Pettigrew, but you assured us we'll find out next chapter. I hope so! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2021.06.21 - 03:50AM | 19: Return to Hogwarts | Signed |
| "She heard a rustling noise behind her..." I am wondering if that's Peter Pettigrew, disguised as Scabbers. He could be the spy (again), as he was before. Not good, whoever is doing the spying! |
| coolarrow7 | 2021.04.13 - 04:42AM | 50: Home | Signed |
| I loved this story. |
| startbynature | 2021.04.11 - 01:05PM | 50: Home | Signed |
| Still one of my all Time top 5s.
I come back to this every few years and become emersed in your wonderful story once more. |
| startbynature | 2021.04.11 - 06:57AM | 50: Home | Signed |
| Still one of my all Time top 5s.
I come back to this every few years and become emersed in your wonderful story once more. |
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