Reviews for Forget Me Not
fresh8 | 2005.05.28 - 06:05PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
update!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Thanks for reading! |
Winter Dragon | 2005.05.28 - 05:09PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
I loved the beginning of the story - but couldn't quite understand what made Snape react strongly enough to tell Hermione to leave. So she said she had a hard time beliving they were married, but he's already realized that this is the worst of all worlds. He knows he has a wife who's not really his wife, so why is he so upset?
Author's Response: In the hallway he is trying to reign in his anger. He wasn't angry at her but at the situation, but later when she brings up every nasty thing about the way he has treated her in the past, it comes barreling out. He isn't thinking clearly and is taking it out on the closest person, which happens to be Hermione. Check out what I wrote in response to another reviewer with a similar question about trying to 'protect' himself too. Thanks for reading! |
jeslyn_nighthawk | 2005.05.28 - 02:24PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
I think this is one of the most original ideas I have read in more than a year. I really hope you continue it soon.
Author's Response: I don't know about original. I definitely have read some stories where one of the two has lost their memory. But I do hope to do something different with it. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: I don't know about original. I definitely have read some stories where one of the two has lost their memory. But I do hope to do something different with it. Thanks for reading! |
SidneySnape | 2005.05.28 - 01:12PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
that is very good. i do hope you will post again soon.
Author's Response: I hope so too. Thanks for reading! |
McHell | 2005.05.28 - 12:33PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
I can't wait to read more. :)
Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! |
Myst | 2005.05.28 - 12:17PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
This is set up well, I hope you continue. I couldn't help but think of the "onions have layers" line from Shrek --in regards to the nesting doll!
Author's Response: I haven't seen Shrek, but it's true. That might even be a better analogy for Snape--he's probably a little smelly and he definitely makes people cry! Thanks for reading! |
Keladry Lupin | 2005.05.28 - 11:42AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
Wonderful start, VanityFair! I'm curious as to who did this to Hermione, and if/how she's going to get her memories back. I'm glad Snape has realized his folly and hope that he keeps that in mind when he gets frustrated.
Author's Response: Oh good, you're intrigued. I can only hope that I will be able to answer those questions to everyone's satisfaction. Thanks for reading! |
Angel2525 | 2005.05.28 - 11:10AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
more please great job so far
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! |
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