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| Haystacks | 2009.01.26 - 02:02AM | 3: 3 | Signed |
| This is a facinating story. I hope you write more! | |||
| kelleygreene | 2008.01.06 - 06:28PM | 3: 3 | Signed |
| I love this! I can't believe it doesn't have thousands of reviews. It's wonderfully original, superbly written, and I can't wait for more...! | |||
| Silver Angel | 2005.12.04 - 05:59AM | 3: 3 | Signed |
| Hi! I hope this story gets continued, because I really love the concept! | |||
| tiddlywinks | 2005.11.23 - 09:00AM | 3: 3 | Signed |
| I'm rather enjoying this... not too many vamp!Snape fics around (decent ones at any rate). I'd like to see more of the prejudice that Snape must have in wizarding society though... how hard is it to resist his vampiric urges? Has this brought him closer to Remus at all? Looking forward to the next update. | |||
| ladycplum | 2005.07.13 - 09:47AM | 3: 3 | Signed |
| I need another chapter! Normally I tend to shy away from Snape as a vampire fic, but this one's pulled me in! | |||
| Maggie | 2005.07.09 - 09:25AM | 3: 3 | Signed |
| Incredible!!! | |||
| Pants | 2005.07.09 - 03:39AM | 3: 3 | Signed |
| I was going to say 'interesting', but I saw that most of your reviewers already have, so I'll try to be a bit creative. Piquant. Nice writng to carry an enticing concept. And your characterisations are quite good, and your dialogue is excellent; the only place I might suggest your writing falls down a bit is in the exposition, the bits where you tell the reader what's happening or what happened in the past. You might want to try showing us - conveying the information through action or dialogue. That way it won't feel like we need to pause to gather information - we can feel like it's still part of the scene instead of outside of it. The story is moving nicely though - good pace, and very interesting. Good backstory, and I like how you wrote Neville in *smirk*. Looking forward to seeing where it's going! | |||
| Scarlet Siren | 2005.07.09 - 02:12AM | 3: 3 | Signed |
| Really interesting story -- original and well-paced. I really like Neville here a lot and Severus is different, yet the same somehow -- all in a very believable way. I'll be keeping a close eye out for updates! | |||
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